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tyeia: Please don't drop the story this is a great story and I would like to see how the story progresses and we haven't even seen a war between the supreme gods

*DROPPED* I Became a God · C55
4 weeks ago

Ed_the_reader: What about dogs man, luv dogs no stinking felines taking over the galaxy on my watch

The Mech Touch · C1373
1 month ago

2risky: The good, the bad, and the ugly has reared it's head in Ves's future, with the young and the devotees and also most importantly the family, has shown its claws to traditions and have forgot the traditions are made for us, we are not made for traditions, this has blinded and hurt many believing they are up hold honor of which in reality it is the sin of pride that causes the divide. Peter learn from this but Judas did not.

The Mech Touch · C1364
1 month ago
Any update View More
*DROPPED* I Became a God · C55
2 months ago
You know that is fair point! View More

mayouki: But wouldn't Gloriana have more confidence in a female bodyguard than a male to protect ves?

The Mech Touch · C1318
2 months ago
Am I only one enjoying this arc? View More
The Mech Touch · C1299
2 months ago

ilyr: i already love her and i think she is perfect to ves. but ketis is also very good and can go to batles together..hmm cam we maybe make a harem? they will be his desyner coworker in public and his lovers in the private.

The Mech Touch · C1282
2 months ago

killab: Lmao the skull architect is hilarious

The Mech Touch · C1263
2 months ago

Kyr8: There is a flag that the prophet may be learning and seeing stuff in the future due to his connection with this fragment residing in Ves's mind.

The Mech Touch · C1207
3 months ago
Good see your keeping at it, but stay up date on studying. View More
From Minnow To Monster · C9
3 months ago

Kyr8: I mean, this may sound Abit silly, but if Exlor could comission someone to maybe draw or give sketches of how he himself envisions the mechs Ves are building looks like, I think alot of us readers would want to see too.
Maybe as something for the book's anniversary or for hitting another chapter milestone??

The Mech Touch · C1205
3 months ago
Nice to see your back! View More
From Minnow To Monster · C8
3 months ago
Awesome!!! View More
From Minnow To Monster · C7
3 months ago
Kilowatt are still making chapters? Hope you still are and hope keep reading your story. View More
From Minnow To Monster · C7
3 months ago
First and please skip View More
Reborn as a GOD · C56
3 months ago

Kilowatt: So, as my own book of course I must give my self a solid 5/5. But actually tho, please check it out. I’m going through college right now, but I’ve always had a passion for writing. If people want chapters, I’ll write em!

From Minnow To Monster
3 months ago

DeadMummy: I been enjoying your book and I hope you keep going with this story. I find that mutation system is different compared to other monster recarnation novels. Keep going!!!

From Minnow To Monster
3 months ago
No new today? View More
Tales of a Killer Flower · C0
4 months ago
Don't worry I understand what college can be like. Just do what you can and I beg don't drop!!!! View More

Kilowatt: Thanks! I tried to come up with something a little more unique for myself, and I really enjoy writing it. The only issue is I’m going through a paramilitary college at the moment, so the time I have to myself to write is limited. But I try to write every chance I get!

From Minnow To Monster
4 months ago

Kilowatt: Thanks! I tried to come up with something a little more unique for myself, and I really enjoy writing it. The only issue is I’m going through a paramilitary college at the moment, so the time I have to myself to write is limited. But I try to write every chance I get!

From Minnow To Monster
4 months ago
Reading Status: C7
I been enjoying your book and I hope you keep going with this story. I find that mutation system is different compared to other monster recarnation novels. Keep going!!! View More
From Minnow To Monster
4 months ago
Thanks for chapter View More
From Minnow To Monster · C7
4 months ago

Aurelzin0: Haha he’s getting nowhere, 80,000 credits down the drain

The Mech Touch · C1150
4 months ago

BattleLord: Thankfully this story arc ends and very spectacularly I might add. I would like to point out some of the highlights and lowlights of this story arc.

I enjoyed the Flagrant Vandal fleet and premises. I feel it adapted well from it's unique Command Structure under Colonel Lowenfield and Major Verle, including its true purpose of Flashlight and Firestarter as the Bright Republics covert branches. Introducing Mech Designer structure within a military organization was well done.

The Vesian/Bright Republic War brought to life from many angles demonstrating the differences between their nations philosophies and the different applications Mech played in the war. Another exceptional bit of story telling.

Introducing other states such as the Rienald Republic, and the Frontier. Demonstrating the underbelly of the galaxy while the earlier story arc dealt with the Komodo Star Sector and places like Leemar and the Clifford Society. Here we met unsavoury Pirates and criminals like the Skull Architect. While this painted an amazing dark dystopian Frontier it failed miserably when it introduced brainwashing Technicians as a viable concept of economic and labor management.

The Church of Haatumak was another failure to sell the concept as to why the Flagrant Swordmaidens made themselves vulnerable to this organization for a voodoo like solution to Sandman protection. I found the concept ludicrous and as poorly written as the stealth shuttle.

While Seven was an amazing described world the descendant of the Flagrant Swordmaidens into barbarism failed to be reasonably. The Officers were inept, Ves was out of control, and their senseless prejudice against the dwarves and the atrocities that were written was poorly orchestrated. Plenty of editing errors, badly researched methods very much marred what had the potential to be another "Avatar Experience". Instead it felt like Pee-wee Hurman's Big Adventure only add child molestation and you summed it up.

Character Development or devolution seems to be what happened throughout this story arc. Even before they reached Seven, Ves was pathetic to identify with. Endless filler chapters that didn't advance the story dragged out the tragedy. I am actually hoping Sigrund tears the SHIT out of this dystopian future because there no redeeming features to it.

The science fiction is good when it appears which appears to be less than ten percent of the time. The Mech Touch description should include the tag "Very Dark" to let readers know what is in store for them. I believe I am giving a potential 5 star novel 1 star for its overall performance this story arc. I didn't rate the previous arc's because they were all 5 stars.
⭐️

The Mech Touch · C935
6 months ago
I feel likes Ves needs some self reflection on the actions he's done so far in this arc, and what better self reflection if dear old ghost mom comes to visit him. I think it would awesome see her again and start pushing some of Ves buttons, and help him go back on track on who he once was versus who is now. I think it would help redeem this arc little bit, and it would help Ves learn that he needs learn self control and would encourage more development from him. View More

BattleLord: Thankfully this story arc ends and very spectacularly I might add. I would like to point out some of the highlights and lowlights of this story arc.

I enjoyed the Flagrant Vandal fleet and premises. I feel it adapted well from it's unique Command Structure under Colonel Lowenfield and Major Verle, including its true purpose of Flashlight and Firestarter as the Bright Republics covert branches. Introducing Mech Designer structure within a military organization was well done.

The Vesian/Bright Republic War brought to life from many angles demonstrating the differences between their nations philosophies and the different applications Mech played in the war. Another exceptional bit of story telling.

Introducing other states such as the Rienald Republic, and the Frontier. Demonstrating the underbelly of the galaxy while the earlier story arc dealt with the Komodo Star Sector and places like Leemar and the Clifford Society. Here we met unsavoury Pirates and criminals like the Skull Architect. While this painted an amazing dark dystopian Frontier it failed miserably when it introduced brainwashing Technicians as a viable concept of economic and labor management.

The Church of Haatumak was another failure to sell the concept as to why the Flagrant Swordmaidens made themselves vulnerable to this organization for a voodoo like solution to Sandman protection. I found the concept ludicrous and as poorly written as the stealth shuttle.

While Seven was an amazing described world the descendant of the Flagrant Swordmaidens into barbarism failed to be reasonably. The Officers were inept, Ves was out of control, and their senseless prejudice against the dwarves and the atrocities that were written was poorly orchestrated. Plenty of editing errors, badly researched methods very much marred what had the potential to be another "Avatar Experience". Instead it felt like Pee-wee Hurman's Big Adventure only add child molestation and you summed it up.

Character Development or devolution seems to be what happened throughout this story arc. Even before they reached Seven, Ves was pathetic to identify with. Endless filler chapters that didn't advance the story dragged out the tragedy. I am actually hoping Sigrund tears the SHIT out of this dystopian future because there no redeeming features to it.

The science fiction is good when it appears which appears to be less than ten percent of the time. The Mech Touch description should include the tag "Very Dark" to let readers know what is in store for them. I believe I am giving a potential 5 star novel 1 star for its overall performance this story arc. I didn't rate the previous arc's because they were all 5 stars.
⭐️

The Mech Touch · C935
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Mech Touch · C935
6 months ago
Thanks for comment and also I have theory on why Ves personality is so different now. Sense Ves join Vandels, Ves has had do things against his own designer code. Shown when Ves had bend his own code by trying brainwash Xie which I thank may have caused some of the personality change Ves. Also, another thing that heavily effected Ves was the Skull Architect which could inadvertently caused Ves taken in some of his own personality, shown by how Ves treated the dwarves. Lastly the biggest reason for his personality change is he's in middle of a way and always in life threatening situations. He hasn't had time to think about it's right or wrong, he's just wants to survive. Maybe after this arc and when he returns Republic then he may change his personality back to old Ves. What do you think?

If Ves doesn't get Catablast as his leader for Shadow Force then I will be really disappointed. She basically knows Ves biggest secret and her backer probably won't want her around anymore. Also, I would like it Ves can have more trusting relationship with her and maybe can friends instead of subordinate relationship if she makes the Shadow Force.

Ketis character I find is very static mainly because of the Sword Maidens influence on her still holds firm, shown by how she still practicing sword over mech designs. Once she leaves Sword Maidens and goes with Ves, if, then she blossom into a more interesting disciple character that Ves will have to teach and help himself fix his own bent design philosophy.

This is my overall opinion though and can change on how story progresses. View More

BattleLord: Well said, now that more dominos have fallen the pattern is becoming more recognizable. I am happy some of my guesses were accurate while still surprised by the revelations as they unfold. For those who skipped and skimmed all the boring filler chapters, they missed the numerous breadcrumbs leading to this moment.

While I have lost all connection to the Main Character, I find Calabast's character well written and much better than Ketis as a supporting character. I know no novel has ever switched out Main Characters I can definitely see her as a key character in this novels future. Ves's wife might be to extreme as he does not demonstrate any romantic interest in women or men. Falling in love with a AI master villain is definitely within his ideal mate criteria.

Now that Calabast realizes her backers were duped into being pawns of a sentient AI, I doubt she will see a payday, and more than likely be a liability to their complicity in breaking into a CFA asset. I guess she now needs Ves, more than she needs him. I wonder what she would think of an offer to lead Ves's covert Shadow Mech Division. Ketis is totally unsuitable for the task. There is nothing subtle about her.

The Mech Touch · C932
6 months ago

randoeveryman: Miss arnlend is her name huh

The Mech Touch · C932
6 months ago

BattleLord: Well said, now that more dominos have fallen the pattern is becoming more recognizable. I am happy some of my guesses were accurate while still surprised by the revelations as they unfold. For those who skipped and skimmed all the boring filler chapters, they missed the numerous breadcrumbs leading to this moment.

While I have lost all connection to the Main Character, I find Calabast's character well written and much better than Ketis as a supporting character. I know no novel has ever switched out Main Characters I can definitely see her as a key character in this novels future. Ves's wife might be to extreme as he does not demonstrate any romantic interest in women or men. Falling in love with a AI master villain is definitely within his ideal mate criteria.

Now that Calabast realizes her backers were duped into being pawns of a sentient AI, I doubt she will see a payday, and more than likely be a liability to their complicity in breaking into a CFA asset. I guess she now needs Ves, more than she needs him. I wonder what she would think of an offer to lead Ves's covert Shadow Mech Division. Ketis is totally unsuitable for the task. There is nothing subtle about her.

The Mech Touch · C932
6 months ago

Agniwolf: i must say, the the ai revelation was completel unexpected

i especialy loved the sarcasm of sigrung purposefuly using a dwarf as main identity, it justifies watever method ves tries to get rid of it in the future

purge dwarves

The Mech Touch · C932
6 months ago
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