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Commented Is there a difference in this and the mtl fic, doesn’t seem like there is any same story plot and charecter, next she’s going to act as Jorel did nothing wrong and get killed, question is author are u copying this if so plz tell because I came here hoping it would be different from the original mtl novel
ch 109 Chapter 109: "That's Your Father"
DC: New Krypton (Omniverse)
Anime & Comics · Baph0met
His ability is gift every month unique skills which he can choose and specify a type off, he runs away from Gotham, okay but to study and later enlist in the army, my god what a way to ruin things, he wants to hide from everyone but joining the military is to help people when he earns around 500 million in 1 month yup the mc is very stupid and too OP I wouldnt recommend’ this to anyone looking for a gradualally getting powerful mc, the whole joining the military was a waste of time, the mc seems to waste time when he knows he’s in DC seriously what will school and military do in DC verse. Try at your own risk.
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4mth
Commented Question is will u continue this beyond the doll gamer fic or not??
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4mth
Commented Honestly if I were him I would shout out to haunter about Agatha’s plan for it let’s see what she can do about it. Sorry author the whole fic is going down for me, I really did like the idea of EM but the charecter know is just plain stupid
ch 32 Chapter 32
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
Book&Literature · Basso2142
4mth
Commented It’ getting forced honestly first oak then green and out of the blue here’ s agatha blaming and forcing him as bait, sure the mc is also acting too much of an idiot when he should be a top ranker top3 of the year, honestly it’ like EM does nothing for the mcs memory and knowledge, it’ becoming a mess to me, the middle onwards in this chapters was beyond me, honetly most of his secret knowledge is being used for others first leaf and now Agatha
ch 31 Chapter 31
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
Book&Literature · Basso2142
5mth
Commented Heard you author, I mean to us it seems leaf is a professor while the mc is ash he literally knows nothing, at least not much more then ash. Okay will wait for the whole plot hole you made in the author note, but seriously leaf is a bit too bossy on mc. Still thanks for the update
ch 25 Chapter 25
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
Book&Literature · Basso2142
I have read a fic similar to this on fanfiction are u the same author though? Overall it’ modern technology in old times
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5mth
Commented He’s being forced to much he should have a backbone the idea of EM was amazing but giving it to others was rediculous, please change this if you can it seems to forced, adding romance to the Pokémon world especially in the beginning is just wrong, just separate the whole bond and sharing em with leaf
ch 24 Chapter 24
Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
Book&Literature · Basso2142
6mth
Replied to Maximus_Quill Does it have a syst em
7mth
Commented Most likely related to obito or bijuu chakra according to origin world
''Welcome back to the world of the living, Rin Nohara''
Naruto: The forgotten Senju's
Anime & Comics · Michaellll
9mth
Commented I think u can find it on Mtl nation
ch 41 Chapter 41: Failed Fusion Fat What?
Reborn In Dragon Ball As Goten
Anime & Comics · Rex_Zatch
10mth
Commented Nice chapter seemed very realistic
ch 10 chapter 10
Genius Gigolo Gilderoy
Movies · WebReaderPub
10mth
Commented It’s very suspicious that the Mito doesn’t transfer the kyuubi to her grandson or even to another senju child but to an uzumaki what a hypocrite
ch 27 Ch-27 Invitation to the Chunin Exams
Uzumaki Fire God
Anime & Comics · Hkj
Ashborn2271
A/N I know he is too weak for a guy who lives in 616, but you gotta keep in mind, he is only level 1. the lowest possible level, and I plan on taking his progression rate at a reasonable speed, I don't want him to one shot one of the most powerful characters in chapter 20 or something, so do bear in mind that this is the first arc, which Is the street level arc and it's supposed to be an introductions/starter arc, of course, there would different arcs like the mystical art, the sci-fi arc, the space arc, and the prehistorical arc, so just bare with me.
Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali