Badges 7
Moments 11
1yr
Commented .... ward door and walked "in" ..... stepped "in" ....
Tian Huilan quickly opened the ward door and walked out. As soon as she stepped out, she saw her father sitting in a wheelchair with a helpless expression. A young and beautiful female nurse was pushing the wheelchair, and there was a middle-aged doctor in a white coat explaining to him as he walked.
God-tier Farm
Urban · Gentleness In A Steel Gun
1yr
Commented ten times faster not slower
In other words, the flow of time in this Spiritual Map Space was 10 times slower than the outside world!
God-tier Farm
Urban · Gentleness In A Steel Gun
3yr
Commented chapter 18 already and the grammar is like machine translation. the ideas and all jumbled, missing words, inconsistent terms and names. The story would be awesome if not for the above. please find an editor to streamline the story and bring out the gem.
ch 18 Leaving the Sect and Problems 1
Divine Talent Born Mortal
Eastern · goodlion
3yr
Commented should his gold be 989 since he paid 11 gold at the tavern...
ch 40 Chapter 40 - A Classified Mission
Earthling in Uncharted Dimensions
Fantasy · UtopianLegend
3yr
Commented the suspense is unbearable!!!! 😵😵🤤
ch 75 Eve of the Match
Martial Arts Battle Arena
Sci-fi · SuperHippo
3yr
Commented it's kinda weird and illogical that he desperately needs an attack spell but opted for a movement spell when he has enough gold points. There is no explanation in his viewpoint why he went with a movement spell.
ch 0 7 Into the Academy
The Mysterious Black Magician
Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
TheToadInTheWell
Ranking Of Kings: My Land Is SSS Rank
Fantasy · Prince Bojji