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yes, his fairy comes back, but only for him. Right after a battle, he can't see her for a while. even to the latest chapter 1300, where i stopped. He still hasn't fixed a certain situation where he can talk with his fairy. Nuri SLIGHT SPOILER in some way meets with the mc. Elena is just a bunch of drama. I don't like her. After a certain conclusion. she still hasn't been with the mc. All in all, mc women aren't even with him in the latest chapter. Due to a problem that occurs.

typically awespec novel that kills its potential. Mc gets op abilities that author nerfs every second he can get. author makes mc filled with pride but is somehow supposed to be different than prideful arrogance. Making every encounter avoidable, but i guess plot. author makes the first thousand chapters a tutorial only to open up a whole new power system. Author word padding is godly wasting 10s of chapters. probably has a Dao of padding. mc harem and women are worthless. mainly because the author can't give them screen time. which kills the immersion. Overall, I kept reading to the end because I just liked the powers. besides that, I would have dropped.

I don't even know where to start. review somewhat of a spoiler. I'm caught up to the latest chapter. which is chapter 468. I'll just list pros and cons.pros: good r18 scenesGood world background and is interesting. cons: horrible grammar, usually am lenient, but it is pretty bad.idiot Mc brain dead McMc only relies on the systembland npc Mchorrible system until chapter 400 spoiler!!!!!!!!!!!!: system was presumed to be an old man leeching on Mc. Pretending to be his friend. Until he could gain everything. System fixes itself, which kills the old supreme fake system old man. It gets better because the system seems to actually be a system now. Helping the Mc grow. Mc spams one spell and brain-dead rushes enemies.Mc never learns any information for himself. He always asks for the system this and that. when if he actually just got information or put effort himself. He would have never had so many problems. Overall it has so many problems. If you have stuff to read, don't choose this. if you don't have stuff to read like me. I would say go for it with your brain turned off. I think the author seems to have a creative mind and potential. He just has to work on his mc and writing big time.

mc is basically op with no character development. side characters have more development than the mc. if you are looking for an evil mc kinda dense op mc. I think you'll like it. would have been a bit more lenient for the rating. Just decided to be a bit harsher. Since it seems this novel has people boosting the reviews. review from chapter 100 decided to drop.

fast reviewThe biggest problems I have had were the grammar and Indonesia explanations. The grammar is really bad but a bit readable. I understand this is the authors first English novel. Still, it just isn't enjoyable to read powers that are translated in a different language. Making the powers not memorable and immersion breaking. It just doesn't feel right that an orc is getting powers from whatever religion you follow irl. Then, he goes on to explain these religious powers to other orcs, and they somehow understand. I think you have something decent. You just have to get better in english grammar. As well as not having so much of your cultural influence in the book. Cultural influence isn't bad, but when it's thrown so much in your face. Especially in a fantasy like story like this. It just kills all immersion for a reader like me.

review from chapter 88. story so far has just been meh. It really is a nice read but bland. I feel as though the Mc is a Gary stu. most females easily fall for him. gets married out of nowhere easily. Mc constantly keeps having things go his way. He is op for his level. fighting above his level constantly. So if you really like op Gary stu Mc read this. I'm not trying to be mean as well. It is just the way I see it. which has made me drop it. Since I just find to boring at this point.

oh alright author that is good to know. Just if you do try making it big. Which I believe your story can. I think your writing/grammar is the biggest flaw. Once that is fixed, I think you can be up there.

biggest problem to start off is the writing. it is so bad and needs major work. I was about to drop many times. So if you don't like to have to correct the writing in your head, don't read. Mc doesn't feel human at times. The author loves portraying the Mc as someone who can control their emotions. Which doesn't really come out well. Since the Mc just feels dead at times. A plus is that if you like transgression game stories. I think you will like this one. Since i love in game transgressions a bit too much. So i am a bit biased. At least for me, it is a plus. Another negative is mc and romance. It doesn't have much build up. plus, the girls seem to like him first always. Which then just has him saying yes. I really don't like how easy it is for him personally. Regardless, I liked the story even with its inconsistencies. Just the writing and grammar need to be fixed big time. Review is from finishing chapter 199.

yeah, i probably worded it badly in the sentence. I put that just didn't come out right if you didn't understand.

I understand, author. Thank you for taking the time to read my review. I was pretty emotional based on this review. This review should be taken with a grain of salt. As I spewed things, I disliked and wasn't as objective. Regardless, keeping working hard. I think you'll be able to be full time. if you haven't already.

I think this story is decent. Recommending anyone to read it and give it a try. I will mainly just be giving cons. Since i recommend the story. This means anything i dont mention is done well.To begin with, I think the prologue shouldn't even be there. It was my fault as well for reading it. It instantly just throws a scene from a part in the story we haven't reached. Giving us the info of a woman he will be with. Which we didn't really need to know. Next, I feel like the story moves slowly but, at the same time, has a fast setting. Meaning you describe too much and prolong moments. What I really don't like has well is how non immersive the story feels. compared to your other works. I love how you have a whole world built. Just the way you went about it was off putting. First, he is a student, and then the incident happens. Now, he is open to a new world. After he wants to balance his life. Next, he has problems come up. His views change quickly. Then experiences time skip in library. Making all this happen so quickly. It's not really making me feel grounded with the mc. Lastly, I don't like how easily mc gets things. I am usually one for op mcs. Just not ones that seem to go well at every turn. Sure, you describe how he agonizes, but it mostly occurs when just buying from his system. Buying things that change his body. Which I don't mind the system doing. It's just so easy for him to use the system. He gets points from doing good or bad things. That makes everything he does easy. As every scenario he is in, he still gets points. At the same time, he gets discounts in the store. Overall, this is just my opinion and what I didn't like. If you even made it this far. Hope you at least got something from this review. It kind of was like a rant. Which I don't usually do in reviews. I just see a lot of potential in this story.

The only problem I have is updates. The author had something good. Will assume he is dead at this point. He hasn't uploaded it in a while. So don't read if you don't like it incomplete. romance and action are pretty good. The main girl is Bolma and seems to be one girl so far. I was up to date. I am making this review since he won't update it. Making this the only review as if it is finished.

SEMI SPOILERS AND BAD SENTENCE STRUCTURE REVIEW. I think for me personally. it started off weak, then it got good. Slowly, it got bad right when it was getting good. Mc starts changing, following in love weirdly and not naturally. On top of that, the story already had regressors. It wasn't a problem until even a friend came along. This friend is one from his old world and has played the game. So now this friend knows more info than Mc and has unique abilities. Making me feel even more unsettled. As I just don't see the Mc being unique. Now, to what made me drop this. The Mc all of a sudden has an internal conflict with the body he took over. which then switches to a scene later. where Mc says he will now kill all regressors. Regardless of whether the author will explain. This all could have been prevented. The author just never had signs or built towars these problems. All in all, it had potential. The author just lost it along the way.