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Jessica_Hutcheson

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2019-10-29 Joined Global

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I, a woman, have said something similar before.

"Damn, I thought mine is already small but that gave me confidence!"

Magic With You (BL)

Magic With You (BL)

LGBT+ · KenceRussel

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classic (xianxia) plot device: a random group of demonic cultivators

A random group of demonic cultivars stormed the Qie Mansion and forcibly opened the labyrinth but this so-called labyrinth wasn't as simple as it seemed. It turns out it was the door to some type of underworld but this place was far worse than hell.

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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you only live once...though he has been through 4 virtual lives

After much appeasing, Qie Ranzhe finally agreed but he had a lot of conditions in place which included going to the so-called bridal chamber island the very next day. Wen Qinxi felt cold shivers down his spine thinking about the anxiety and thrill that came with having sex on the beach. Thinking one only lives once he agreed to it. In some way, he was sort of looking forward to it.

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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like the same aunty at a fish market that scolded them for following Zhao Huangzhi in the last world?

Wen Qinxi for the first time in his life felt like rolling his eyes but held back and said, "Of course, I am fuckin pregnant. I am a marked omega for heaven sake yet you had the balls to abduct me. What the fuck were you thinking?" said Wen Qinxi scolding him like an angry aunty at a fish market.

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

LGBT+ · Andru_9788

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He had to "observe carefully" to realize a purple cat as tall as a house was different from normal cats? Guess a few hundred years in a shifting world with monsters will do that to you...

The big cat was at least six to seven meters tall, but it was currently sleeping on a moist gigantic stone. Wei Huo observed carefully and realized that the big cat was different from normal cats. Its fangs were long like a saber-toothed tiger, and it had dark purple fur. It looked very weird.

Five Frozen Centuries

Five Frozen Centuries

Games · Dr. Dreamer

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"long braid red hair" --> options below: - "long braided red hair" - "long red hair in a braid" or "long red hair in braids" (one braid or multiple braids? if you leave it at "braided" you don't have to specify) - "red hair in a long braid" or "red hair in long braids" - "braided long red hair" [Can you tell I'm procrastinating by looking for possible grammar edits in my favorite novel?]
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Yaya still suffering --> Yaya was still suffering
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"and really reluctant to consume" --> - "and feels really reluctant to consume" or - "and is really reluctant to consume"
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[Level Up Pill]: Increases the level of the one who eats it by 1 level.
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many of my blood --> much of my blood (many is for discrete/countable items)
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before bit --> before she bit
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"making the rumbling sounds" --> "made rumbling sounds"
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either: - "after entering her bedroom and lying down on her bed" or - "after she entered her bedroom and lay down on her bed"
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either "dizzy and nauseous" or "dizziness and nausea"
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