Danae05 - Profile

I think the length of the chapters are way too short. Also, I think is dragging a lot the story I don’ think the author needs to keep reminding us and describing with detailed how Evangeline always thinks Leo is there only to find out is someone else, but Leo is behind. I feels these scenes keeps repeating way too many times in the story that some times I just feel to skip ahead because it is getting boring. Sorry for being honest. I like the story, I think it has potential, but too wordy.

It seems the author gave up, or got bored, to continue the story☹️. I was enjoying the story so much that I kept purchasing privilege chapters, so it is a disappointment if this was the last chapter. There are so many loose ends. There were pieces of stories that were started within the story that I mean what was the point of even including them if there was never going to be a follow up. I really hope this is not the end, and if it is, then I hope there is an epilog.

I have purchased privilage chapters and it never let continue to read. i think there is a glitch :(