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AnimalLover: This is an amazing story with plenty of action in it!! From romance to fighting, it has it all!! I hope you take your time to follow the path of Diana with us. It's an amazing one!!Diana
Haruyuki1: Hello. want to say I really love the story. A unique story. Girls are truly recomended to read this. The plot is progressing in great pace. 😍😍😍😍😍Diana
joann_movilla: Hmmmm try reading this one im sure u love it..realese morreee😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Diana
schreient: I always have a soft spot for FLs who refuses to be bullied. Banzaii lol
The overall idea is actually engaging and makes one curious to find out the crux of it.
I honestly rarely give reviews because I'm very picky with the writer's grammar and flow of the storytelling in general.
Now with these two mentioned above, I sincerely like the fluidity of the paragraphs. They connect well with each other. I confess to hating too much redundancy in any story and would drop it ASAP. I am happy that this story has a nice flow going in it. There is confidence where the author wants to take his readers with each scene and it makes unfolding the mystery more exciting.
On another note, I'd like for the author to put more care and focus on grammar development when he/she has time. A simple check of whether the words are capitalized correctly when they should is a very easy feat and do not require much technical knowledge. This would make reading better as the readers will know that it's the beginning of a new sentence. If she/he has time, then a quick practice/ learning focused on the subject-verb agreement, tenses, punctuation, and word choice would make this book totally better.
With this, I wish the author good luck, keep up the good work, and looking forward to more development.Diana
Laurasiscoyote: All I can say is that I love it.
It seems super original and from the first moment it caught my attention.
I recommend it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Diana
LiLhyz: This is a very interesting novel. Still at chapter 18 and really looking forward to reading more. Hoping that FL gets to be reunited with her parents soon. Actually, I want to know more about her parents. haha.
Don't get me wrong, I also look forward to the development of Diana and Ethan.
Best of luck dear author and more power to you.Diana
KENTARO12100: Amazing plot, i want to see what happend next pls continue writing the story and Diana baby always you have the option of use plastic cirugy, no one is ugly if you have money ;DDiana
Jenjibread: In the beginning of the story, I would have to admit that I did find some issues with characterization and just the whole idea of it. Sure, the idea of a less-than-pretty girl who doesn't have a whole life of riches was tempting. But let's be real, it was sure to spin off into that whole idea of a CEO falling in love with her despite her looks because of inner beauty right? She would end up just gaining more confidence and finding her one true love, and the plotline would spin off to yet another cliche.
Psyche. The novel took a whole spin into something completely different. An interesting chemistry? Check. A bold and self-reliant FL who sees past her own flaws while not winning over the entire world? Check. Actual character development and world-building? Check. I think the part that I least expected was for all of the characters to actually tie back to the original story arc as if it was all planned beforehand.
Writing Quality: If you don't mind the occasional capitalization error and tense issue, you'll be fine. They don't really interfere with your understanding of the story, much less your enjoyment.
Stability of Updates: I get like a notification a day lol
Story Development: See above, enough said.
Character Design: It's like an all-inclusive package but still doesn't end up becoming just a mess.
World Background: Lots and lots of action ^-^Diana
I Can't Believe I Fell In Love With You
Xana0123: It was Clara’s first day of work.Her job required her to clean a rich It was Clara’s first day of work.Her job required her to clean a rich man’s mansion for high pay. After failing to keep a stable job, Clara’s friend Sonya referred her to a cleaning job in which she worked in. Clara, however, was terrible at keeping a job as she would be framed repeatedly by her colleagues. Her astounding beauty and grace led to rush of jealousy from workers who felt threatened by her.
’’Clara, for both our sakes, please try not to get fired “ , Sonya pleaded.
This is the first four paragraphs of your story. It can be improved easily without much effort. I hope this doesn't come of as rude but you can do some much better with this story.I Can't Believe I Fell In Love With You · C1
TopazQueenPalm: I'm surprised by Jeffrey's complete 180° turn. Where did that come from, none of his friends complained about Diana's behavior or appearance. Their comments were on par for the way they treated each other. It almost feels like someone paid him to date her.Diana · C3
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