Sykama

7mth

Replied to Sykama

Also you're writing is terrific, I hope you keep going.

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Sykama

7mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

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Sykama

7mth

Replied to Nobody_0wens

The man is fighting monsters, large creatures. This skill suggests he can launch large projectiles, one with a pointed edge, capable of impaling creatures of massive size (after all something doesn't need to have a sharp edge but a sharp point to pierce something, imagine a bullet which is round on the body except for its pointy top). And if you think about it which sounds better puny arrows or what you could consider tank ammunition (I don't know what tanks use, missiles?). Though this is a world of magic so I guess anything can go. Cheers :D

Looking at the Heavy Glacial Spear skill book, Howard could almost visualize a gigantic lance shooting out, hitting and impaling enemies, leaving them pinned to the ground, unable to move.

Talent Awakening: I, the Weakest Awakened, Start with Dragonfire Spell

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

Sykama

7mth

Commented

Hope you feel better and take your time :)

ch 39 Author Announcement! Important

Sykama

1yr

Commented

please tell me this will be continued

ch 40 The Auction Begins

Reincarnated As An Orc Slave, A Beautiful Princess Redeemed Me

Fantasy · Frozen Throne

Sykama

1yr

Replied to Daoist0ccPtW

He's not dense, his trait is unyielding. Which is a good trait (though I like dense mcs just as much).

ch 37 Ragna

Sykama

1yr

Posted

I like the plot, the characters, the pacing of the story. All of it. Love the mc.

Reincarnated As An Orc Slave, A Beautiful Princess Redeemed Me

Fantasy · Frozen Throne

Sykama

3yr

Replied to Ancient_

I wouldn't say 'quite' young but yeah he is still in his prime.

His expression became gentler as he said, "Mr Suolo, you are still young and in your strongest years. There's no need to do rash things that might destroy the rest of your life."

Sykama

3yr

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I really need to find a way to get rid of this black circle, thought Shen Tian. Any color would be better than this curse-looking black!

I Am Really Not The Son of Providence

Urban · Palace in the Clouds

Sykama

3yr

Replied to TheKnightWhoSaysNi

This is my first time writing anything I just doing this on a whim please tell me your honest opinion ( Ps. I have a delicate heart to please be nice in you criticism)

He did not care about the Rank-6 Core that he could harvest from the now-dead Mage. Because not only it wouldn't really help him increase his strength much, but he was also exhausted from the fight. The injuries still hurt even though he had no blood.

Unsealing Emptiness

Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes

Sykama

3yr

Replied to KimJungTao

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

Sykama

3yr

Replied to KimJungTao

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

Sykama

3yr

Replied to KimJungTao

I apologize if I seemed hostile at first, it's hard to express the correct emotion using only text. I try not to make people feel down when I make disagreements, it makes me feel terrible. Anyways it was fun banter on my part, have a nice day and I hope you enjoy the story.

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

Sykama

3yr

Replied to KimJungTao

P.S. know my intentions are not to rile you up. Just trying to present to you my perspective on things. I'm no English major, so the thing about authors and such you can also take with a hint of salt, it's just my outlook. P.P.S. I currently have lots of time on my hands, that's why I could write that essay from my previous message. Happy Reading :D

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

Sykama

3yr

Replied to

Alright, let's say there is an issue with the author being unnecessarily repetitive. Bring it up with the author through the reviews and if he changes it to your liking, then Hurrah. If not then just read the story as is, as I mentioned previously anyone can write a story. In other words, it's best to go into a story with little to no expectations. Now onto my next point, when an author is being repetitive in a story it is to remind the reader throughout the story. Usually, the authors keep the explanation brief. Now I'm not sure if the author of this novel is proficient in English ( I haven't read this novel in a while ) but try to understand informed readers can continue the story with less confusion/misconceptions. Now to the next point, the system does not necessarily have to be formal/stiff. The system provides descriptions, in descriptions you can find: lore, witty remarks, etc. Go to google images and type 'legend of Zelda item description' which should show an image of an armored Carp, if you read the description you'll know what I mean. Next point, why did I mention the last sentence despite you not mentioning the last sentence? Well, I was trying to prove my point. Where the description is fine as is. I'm going to be brutally honest, your description was no different than the original. Also, either one is grammatically correct, so there is no need to change it. Anyway, enjoy the story :)

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

Sykama

3yr

Replied to KimJungTao

This isn't over explanation, it's lore. Plus the last sentence explains how to improve the flame. Another thing to note, is that this part of the passage involves the system. So that might be why you're interpreting it as stiff dialogue, which is really just a description.

(Hell Flames Lv 01): A technique that consists in invoking the flames of hell itself. The flames of hell were no different from normal flames, but after purifying so many sins and so many sinners, it became the most powerful flame, having even burned the god of the flames himself, making him beg Lucifer to put out those flames before he died. To increase the power of the flaming ability of hell, you must burn either sins or sinners.]