Cbl4

5mth

Commented

I'm gonna be honest with you: it's not great. It got noticibly better but still not great.Problem is that I've seen a lot worse so can't say you're doing bad job (especially considering fact that it keeps getting better).I'd say now main problem is descriptions for things happening. In places they don't feel like part of same text and in others they have weird perspective shift that makes them sound just as out of place but for different reasons.And the story is fine (seen worse, done worse). This kind of power fantasy is refreshing every once in a while in a world where it's all super serious harem/romance/cultivation combo aimed at most mindless (and sadly most numerous) audience possible or a clownshow written with intent of being serious and failing miserably at every step. And a lot of those stories are fine, but how many times you can read another against-the-odds-grimdark-full-of-suffering stories can you read in a row? That's literally THE reason why SI power fantasy been the only stuff i read lately, especially when it comes to cyberpunk fanfics (there is only so many times I'm ready to see how dreadful authors can make that world to make the bubble of relative happiness around their characters seem nicer).

I further want to ask everyone if the grammar has improved or is it still as bad as at the beginning.

Cbl4

7mth

Commented

Chapter when?

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The cake was a lie!

Psionic Super Soldier summoned to another reality!

Fantasy · Lilith_Zenon

Cbl4

7mth

Posted

Upload schedule is a lie but damn the quality is so worth it. Humans being humans for (however many times we were at this already?), arrogant idiots trying to force the "tool" they just upgraded to work within old parameters and it all resulting in dragon mommy isekai™. Wonder if MC will get to actually talk rather than force telepathy down everyone's throat? -Content-starved degenerate

Psionic Super Soldier summoned to another reality!

Fantasy · Lilith_Zenon

Cbl4

8mth

Replied to SleepnSweets

Go into server settings -> moderation -> safety setup Look through the options there and look into setting up automod (in moderation category just under safety)

ch 132 Dealing with Beet

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

Fantasy · SleepnSweets

Cbl4

8mth

Replied to SleepnSweets

The obvious solution (although still not perfect) would be putting up the screening option that doesn't allow people with accounts too new or without connected phone number to join.Or you can have nanomancer situation where even at over 1.2k users it's somehow still not a problem.

ch 132 Dealing with Beet

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

Fantasy · SleepnSweets

Cbl4

8mth

Commented

Stress relief brrrrrt gun when (I feel like that sound can heal souls)?

ch 132 Dealing with Beet

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

Fantasy · SleepnSweets

Cbl4

11mth

Replied to SthUnlimted

Then keep things as they are. Quality is really good now, updates are frequent enough not to raise expectations higher than necessary and plot is great. Can't even complain about grammar... And thanks for the content

ch 43 Hellfire Invasion(8): Fuck Batman

Cbl4

11mth

Commented

Right now I have exactly one author who updates daily with good quality and best I can say about that: not sure if he is human. Which isn't helped by fact that he's updating two works each day with chapters about 1.5-2.5k long. Don't make us question how human you are if you don't get paid for this enough to not have any other source of income.

ch 43 Hellfire Invasion(8): Fuck Batman

Cbl4

11mth

Commented

Then do just that. It's better to take a day or two off now than to drop ill for a week or two because you didn't rest.

ch 126 Sorry, No Chapter Today...

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Cbl4

11mth

Commented

Starcraft reference/10

"Hell, it's about time."

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

Glad to know that at least one of authors I read can take a break without burning out beforehand or being forced to by other people. Hope your time off will help.

ch 111 I am taking a short break...

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

Was hoping for a lot more of "making unintended holes in lancers body (as in violently stabbing him into the heart through his back) in front of disgustingly pure one" but this is somehow even better...

ch 73 Chapter 66: What is…

Something I should've mentioned was I had a skill called {Devour}. It allowed me to take the skills, stats, and knowledge of what I eat. I figured out after the hunting got a strange look boar and when I ate, I got its skills, stats, and a few traits. One, my muscles and bone were stronger; two, my skull and all the bones in it became a lot stronger. It was when I realized this was the cheat that was given, no life of glamour just protection from being raped by my clan.

Reincarnated as a Goblin queen

Fantasy · Omega_TC

Cbl4

1yr

Posted

Is it perfect? No. It shouldn't be. If it was, there would be some fundamental problems with our universe or the author wouldn't be human (good news for all involved, I guess?). Is it good? Certainly. Nice change of pace and character from the original of "stumbling into success and harem, that shall never be touched, by being a naive idiot". Am I content-starved to come asking for more? To poke author for updates? To demand for a warning in case work is dropped, and I shall kill my last hope for this platform and humanity? Absolutely! Glad to know all the brain damage this site causes is worth going through for at least one more good work.

This book has been deleted.

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

This is why we can't have nice things... Out of 23 decent fanfics I've stumbled upon in last 3 month only 5 are still updating. All pthers stopped over a year ago with promise that they will not be dropped. Wonder if that's a coincidence or there is some evil plot to starve people of content?

ch 12 Info

Reborn as Albedo

Anime & Comics · Segnir

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

So that was a lie...

At worst case scenario I will be gone for 2 month's

Irregular: demon swordsman across the multiverse

Anime & Comics · Dao_of_Melancholy

Cbl4

1yr

Replied to GloriousMilfHunter

That's all geat and all but new chapter when?

ch 12 Chapter 11: Sealed Door

Genshin Impact: Void's Touch

Video Games · GloriousMilfHunter

Cbl4

1yr

Posted

I guess I'll just follow list of things to rate webnovel gives for this? Writing quality isn't perfect. And if it was, I'd be questioning if author is human or intends this work to be seen by humans. But it's not while being more than good enough. I know exactly one person who makes stable updates (even worse - daily (even worse for two different works)). That person is questionably human, to my understanding does it for living and is people's writer if you know your tags of preference. The story is great, even if pacing is a bit of a mess. Not much I can add there. Can't complain about character design, but have a question. Wouldn't Royal Fortune (the one from Azur Lane) be a better choice for "looks along the lines"? Rory to me seems a lot more serious than Misha was so far (44 chapters by webnovel's counter), while Royal Fortune is just chaotic enough in both character and looks. Also, that smile... World background is good enough to almost make me go read original again (something I swore not to do after being forced to read it in a different language for homework back in middle school (for context: I didn't hate the series themselves, although stopped enjoying them entirely about 4 books in)). Hope that says enough. Content-starved degenerate was here

Harry Potter's Chaotic Twin

Book&Literature · Nartleb

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

1 Great chapter, I'm content-starved again 2 Stop selling your work short like you did last time (there is a lot of works that look bad compared to yours)

ch 23 A world of capes and masks(7)

[DC] Keep your head down!

Anime & Comics · SthUnlimted

Cbl4

1yr

Commented

You have chosen unwisely

So we have bandits sanctioned by nobles running around kidnapping people literally right outside the capital city. What's next? Finding out some guy was breeding and experimenting on monsters in a basement underneath their house?

What Do You Mean There Are Other Transmigrators In My Harem Fantasy?

Fantasy · Draekai

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Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

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