Webnovel Author: EldurJaalind

EldurJaalind

1yr

Commented

Ah, yes, consumerism.

Each floor had dozens of rooms with different types of VR gears in them, depending on what type of game one would play.

EldurJaalind

1yr

Replied to Jack_Nades

for real, where are my mediocre genes at?

Shay squinted his eyes and furrowed his brows at Zach, and said, "Who are you kidding?! You won a 10 million dollar lottery last week, didn't you?"

EldurJaalind

1yr

Commented

introducing characters like this is unnatural I'm sure you know this now, but I still find it worth mentioning. Instead of outright telling these things, you could use plot devices to show their dreams, circumstances, and physical traits.

Kayden, 18 years old, has dark brown hair, black eyes, and a bodybuilder. He was Zach's childhood friend. But unlike Zach, he was popular because of his sturdy build. He was going to inherit his father's tech business.

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

EldurJaalind

2yr

Replied to Zenna73

heck if I remember. been a while since I read it

"Daneel, such a solution cannot be made by one who is not at least an Eminent Warrior Mage. I've studied a small sample. The skill in magic required to cast a spell that uses such intricate particle manipulation is incomparable to any Exalted Human Mage like me. Of course, no matter how talented you are, it is impossible that you have reached that level. In fact, even the Grand Court Mage, who is the second strongest mage in the Kingdom, is also only an Exalted Human Mage. Who is the personage helping you, Daneel?"

World Domination System

Fantasy · KillerHemboy

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Raisgem

I know, I was correcting, lol

Li's first reaction was to walk up to a tree and place his palm on its trunk. He realized then how distinctly inhuman he was. He was almost three meters tall with a body comprised of wood, leaves, and bones.

Re: Level 100 Farmer

Fantasy · John_Doever

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Khalil_Ziad_Issam

a bit late, but eh. a tiara is a crown typically worn by princesses.

This woman was most uncommon: gorgeous, elegant, and with one outstanding difference from all others in the hall—she wore a tiara.

My Pick Up Artist System

Urban · SamsaraWithWords

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Martin_Watson

easy calculation and inflation

In this world, the money was divided into four coins: copper, silver, gold, and royal coins. 100 copper=1 silver, 100silver=1 gold, and 100 gold=1 royal.

Gacha Sovereign

Fantasy · Fixten

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Raenatta

I learned as I wrote, I don't write for cinnamon rolls.

ch 14 Chapter 14: Shattered Will

Ancient Cultivation

Eastern · EldurJaalind

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Raenatta

You assumed correctly. Y'see, I enjoy cliches.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Insanity

Ancient Cultivation

Eastern · EldurJaalind

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to EMpulse

because one way he is forced into it.

If the conditions weren’t fulfilled, the option would be grayed out and unselectable. For example, the [morning jog] option to raise [physical ability] couldn’t be selected unless it was actually morning. But in the morning, it would light up and could be chosen.

NEET Receives a Dating Sim System

Urban · Idle Fish Goes Ashore

EldurJaalind

3yr

Replied to Daoist638579

white is not a light color. there is, green, blue, violet, red, yellow, and one more if I remember correctly

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The King's Mandate: Anomalous System

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

EldurJaalind

3yr

Commented

mildly ironic considering the absence of color is technically black... you see, colors are just light that's reflected. if red light is reflected off of an object, we call it red. and white is the reflection of all colors...