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I understand you but I think it's very naive of you to think that a peaky blinders fic would be light, if even in the series violent and questionable things happen.

War changes people, some more than others, in a place where you only see destruction and death your psyche is destroyed, do you think the MC or Shelby is worrying about the well being of others? what they want is their own well-being, not to mention that to build a business empire, the MC will have to get their hands dirty, whether they like it or not, so don't be too sensitive about it.

War changes people, some more than others, in a place where you only see destruction and death your psyche is destroyed, do you think the MC or Shelby is worrying about the well being of others? what they want is their own well-being, not to mention that to build a business empire, the MC will have to get their hands dirty, whether they like it or not, so don't be too sensitive about it.

Thanks for the chapter, but I would like to know if there is a possibility that in the next story your author-san will make a more anti-hero/villain MC? because both the MC of this story and the MC of harry potter are very heroic, beautiful affectionate who live on a rainbow. you author-san write very well and your stories are a 10, but they are also full of joy and happiness, I want to see a story with the same quality as yours with a little more reality.

Piénselo y responda a mi comentario con el número más o menos de mujeres para el harén, de modo que si encuentro el número demasiado absurdo, me retiraré ahora mismo.

No estoy en contra del harén, pero ¿quieres tener tantas mujeres? un harem con 3 a 4 mujeres esta bien, pero mas que eso ya pierde el sentido, me gusto mucho la historia pero cuando el MC empieza a tomar mujeres como si fueran pokemon entonces me hace perder todo el entusiasmo, el consejo lo acepte sería crear un pequeño harén, porque de esa manera mantendrás tanto a los lectores que quieren un harén como a las personas como yo a las que les gustó la historia pero que la abandonarán si el MC comienza una colección de mujeres sin sentido.

There will be some ritual for Harry to have Grindelwald's bloodline and for him to become the true heir, because after Sirius is freed he will have some control over Harry as the magically bonded godfather, if Grindelwald is not truly responsible for harry by blood.

Will the love interest be Hermione? or she'll just be a friend and you'll develop another female OC and make her the love interest. I prefer the second option just so you know author-san.

As powerful as a person can be, alone it is impossible to win, you need friends and allies like Padma Patil, so I expect more development of future TRUE friends and allies, as at first I really thought Terry Bota would be a friend, but he nothing more than two faces!!!

No problem hehehe, I'll keep following you because I think your story has potential.

Don't copy parts from other stories hehehe, I know where some parts of this chapter came from.

What you said is correct, what we can discuss is the duration of the cover, because if it is for a few years the plot will continue normally because herry needs to hide sometimes from some people magically not as powerful as Dumbledore and not from death himself , another thing that we must take into account is that the world of HP x Marvel, if the relics are really made by lady death, it may not give control over death but it still has a connection with her and that can be a good thing for MC .

First of all, the cape that the MC put in place of the original would still work perfectly for the things harry has to do, and the other relics, the stone wouldn't interfere too much with the plot, it just depends if the dumbledore wants to die in the riddle of the prince by will or because he was already dying because of the horcrux curse, the wand if the dumbledore dies he can take his grave, the plot still won't change that much, voldemort will still use another wand to try to kill harry if Dumbledore don't die the MC has to find a way to get his wand, now... about Dumbledore finding out it's not the real cape, what can he do? the most he did is put a tracking spell on the cover, the MC has a system that analyzes even the philosopher's stone, a very complex item, seeing that it has a tracking and breaking this spell is not so difficult for the MC.

Sometimes I think the Author is crazy in the head, first it was the story of gold with the philosopher's stone, which won't produce much so as not to break the economy, if you don't want to break the economy, just don't use everything, stay with a little and sell it later, gold is never too much, now it's this business of taking the cape and then returning it instead of keeping it and getting the other relics.