Webnovel Author: Not_ayin - Fanfic Collection

Not_ayin

2mth

Commented

personally thought he was gonna go

ch 186 Embodiment of Death

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin

3mth

Commented

look a black hole

"In my dictionary, the term 'give up' never existed." Arkhan said lightly while smiling without worry. "Just relax and enjoy the show. Soon, I'll show you a true myth."

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin

4mth

Replied to Not_ayin

*Cane

[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden]

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin

4mth

Commented

Get the staff version.

[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden]

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin

4mth

Posted

I like the story so far.. especially the MC's personality since to me he sounds like a chill dude, You're pacing is good to me since I understood all that happened, but one thing I suggest is to put the meaning of French words that are relevant to the plot in the bottom since most of us are too lazy to google it up, characters are also fleshed out and aren't just made in China copy paste cut out personalities. you're grammar is also good even though you said it's your third language. I also noticed that the fanfic has a romance tag, I recommend going monogamy and having just a single partner since harems aren't usually all that romantic. I also suggest Furina as a love interests, I would like to see more fanfics with her as one. overall I like it and give it a 5 star, please don't drop. [img=More pls]

Genshin Impact: Detective System

Anime & Comics · TidalMajesty

Not_ayin

4mth

Commented

here's all my stones

ch 0 6 Case Closed

Genshin Impact: Detective System

Anime & Comics · TidalMajesty

Not_ayin

4mth

Commented

Good chap would like to see more author.

ch 0 6 Case Closed

Genshin Impact: Detective System

Anime & Comics · TidalMajesty

Not_ayin

4mth

Commented

it's already better than people with it as a first and second.

Finally, English is my third language, so I apologize if my grammar so far has been mediocre at best.

Genshin Impact: Detective System

Anime & Comics · TidalMajesty

Not_ayin

4mth

Commented

Red is Indeed a good color

"What a coincidence, red is my favorite color."

Honkai Star Rail: The Archiver

Video Games · _Kirirei_

Not_ayin

5mth

Posted

Truly a honkai fanfic, it capture- nay, enraptured my attention with its writing, its an overall 5 stars as it is the most honkai I've read, since it truly is a novel fanfic of honkai that captures what it means to be honkai, again this book truly is the honkai impact.

Not_ayin

5mth

Commented

isn't that good for you? Don't mind me with midterms and a research paper to defend. Oh and a dance presentation right after the research paper defence.

So yeah. Now that the exams is gone, I can go back to uploading again.

Not_ayin

7mth

Commented

you'll love basic calculus

A/N: I hate Pre-Calculus.

Not_ayin

8mth

Replied to MISLEAD

That is a very good suggestion I suggest we take this up with the top brass, and see their reactions.

[4]: Gerhman573 is a beta reader and this is here for vanity sake.

Not_ayin

10mth

Commented

With the other hand holding snacks.

Luckily I'm home alone right now, it's still 7 am and I'll have to pick up my brothers at 11:30 am. Which means no one to disturb me from playing a 'one hand' game.

Not_ayin

11mth

Commented

Author spent too much brain cells studying full metal alchemist alchemy, that some of his brain cells died.

The reason Ankhseram couldn't at this current act at this time didn't know the process of bypassing him.

Not_ayin

11mth

Commented

bro, I think you killed grammar

Ankhseram's role as life and death is to preserve it and punish those that contort or disrupt that cycle but unfortunately, the matter it sees now is out of his realm or jurisdiction to judge the boy in bed asleep for playing as God with life or death.