Webnovel Author: Yue_021 - Novel Collection

Best ATG Fanfic. Absolutely the BEST! No doubt about it. My fav ATG fic.

The writing quality is absolutely great. I can't stress enough just how good the writing quality is. The author was also able to easily bring out emotions of the characters and convey it to the readers. I really teared up in some of the emotional parts of the story. Though the plot is ok and could have some improvements, but if the author is able to do this and combine it with this quality of writing, I have no doubts you would succeed.

Great start!! I love the interactions between them! Hope you can continue this, and you can have all my power stones.

Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.

Just found this novel and have been binging it all night. I appreciate and thank the translators for transalting this. I hope you can keep uploading, I would really love to see the end of this novel.

The Angel Spoils me on my way to the Top (Haikyu & Angel Next Door Fanfic)