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So no white core.All hype and no white core ……..

I mean night is truly screwed.Before horsemen was just small natural disaster now everyone’s number one priority. Abominations and vastor is after her head,griffin kingdom after her head because of manohar and for killing their commanding officers.While salark wont help lith he cant actively move in desert.So only alternative places to hide are gorgon empire and thrud’s base.If lith learn this blackout means they dont have any assoc iations below blue core means they dont have any army.Thinking like this thrud army is more screwed each emperor beast cause directly or indirectly death of their mentor and steal their wealth.That means they all haunted.

Finally there is hope for white

Ancient history phloria’s rumblings.Possibility of lith’s return to her is lower than Lith marrying thrud.

Did you really read my message?I was talking about power dynamic but somehow your response is about the reason of the attack.Next time if you are gonna respond something read it understand what it is then you can respond.

Bad writing on sasha part.If one power increase its gonna expand.Everyside choose the weaker part to expand which is humans.The fact that this outcasts actions are allowed or tolerated means they dont put the humans on same weight as a faction compare to other factions.Of course in that case you need extreme measures to increase your power.Scatach who is weaker than vlad just destroyed the headquarters.If we assume fenrir is same or close to the vlad its not abnormal they are try to do human experiments to increase the power of the vanguards.Well writing gone bad more than 50 chapter so I just read this to pass time.At the moment victor is like a child with tantrums.

If it is why there is no dynamic except kinship?I mean we are at chapter 1670 at this point many character or stories reached their endpoint.Library of heaven,Reverend Insanity,Renegade Immortal,Lord of Mysteries … they reached end point at this chapter.We instead: Initial purple core protaganist 2 breath quick shot insta death deep purple dragon with skeleton mob(which have almost more paragraphs than an actual boss) Period and cooking talk

When is their relationship gonna start?I wish to see some sort of spark like one of the sides are trying to create a relationship.I hope lith leave the kingdom and move to somewhere else so we can see some sort of relationship or kamila gone or date with someone.Even solus enter a slumber and a relation with tyris will be fine at least better than this maybe/stagnant relationship.

You mean like North Korea and Afghanistan?Because even in china couldnt block the information flow that is circulating in their country.They are banning and fine the authors who they think insulating/warping their view but even in there cant stop the other sources.Why?Because they are actively exchanging and trading with the outside world.The reason China,Rusia or USA are great powers because there is active exchange.And so far other than 9 families there is atlantis and the mystery guys.Each have autonomy plus atlantis guys was on world government territory which means they have their guy on Atlantis territory too.We got a proof of active exchange information when they learn the delta city activities.Calling their educational book as historical content is same as calling edison as sole inventor of the light bulb.

Author has got serious misconception about history.History is the amalgamation of knowledge and evidence.No matter how much propagation you make you cant warp the history because it is recorded by multiple parties.If there is a misconception it will generally cause by reading from one source without comparison other sources or not researching good enough. Making a character defect about this shows the character extremely stupid.No one accept a written historical text without researching good enough to accept that as a fact.Otherwise all people who are researching history will not called as researchers they will called as zealots.

Really terrible writing if this guy is actually a girl.If you have to make his only male non-subordinate into female this will be pretty terrible development

Actually at this point that development is meant nothing.This novel somehow able to curb itself on its own for exciting developments.If lith get exposed he is gonna go to empire.Faluel mother is there, so warp gate to faluel.Less restrictive compare to the desert which he definitely dont want to go.Because if he go salark is gonna use him for territory defense which means less time for family. At the current moment only thrilling moment will be if something happen to solus or something happens to his family which cause him to isolate himself from them.Other than that rest of developments will be minor developments.Faluel, Phloria,Kamila,Quyyla,Freya somehow dies or left for good means unfortunately nothing significant.He has lot of stuff to work for so which curb another development if he isolate himself he has centuries of research he has to do.At the moment novel is suffering from excessive knowledge.Author defined everything so well to not leaving many plot holes they became walls that restricted any reader imagination for further development. If anything exciting would happen if its something unknown maybe about mogar and connection with reincarnation or any information of reincarnation that will intrique the reader.Side characters became like classmates you talk once in a while and character feels like he is a kindergarten child with parents on the next room. Balkor copycat arrived with Salark and Vastor.Kamila and Zinya might be in danger and any development to Zinya which add new dynamic to Kamila(A forgotten book in the endless library) comes with Vastor dates with Zinya.Protector leaving who cares instead of old mentor and friend that he acquired in his childhood he was like a guy who you met on long uber drive.Lith abomination side revealed then council accept him with abominations think of him as kin comes with a laegainn’s daughter. The novel need an actual loss with characters that hasnt been stretched like a gum.Character needs to have real low moments in the story instead of sad backstory.One of the good examples who excelled this points was reverend insanity where main character who revolves around benefits lost them at some parts and chased like a dog on other parts.Or library of heaven path(which is pure garbage after 500 chapter repetive as hell)where he lost his student lu chong and go to the kingdom to get revenge(Which was fine at this point where he should be dead but unfortunately author somehow gain Polyanna attitude and want to see the world in pink glasses). Summary:Need actual loss that effect character like he has been seperated from his siamese twin Blank points in story which creates new paths for imagination Non stretched side character information(This is not a reality tv show where I need to learn their every movement) Bad developments without plus ones Not using character slang in every single minor mistake

So why did Oghrom kill himself?Was he grateful so much for Valeron that he want to reach his goals?And when Valeron died his reason of existence diEd with him so he killed himself?Open ending?

I hope it became white core,eldritch and guardian in a same package.3 life force so it will turn into something interesting.Lith is the peak of egotistical character in this novel.With that type of mentality there is no way he can became a guardian.After all he doesnt have an strong ideology compare to the other guardians.What lith wants is to anchor himself to the world.Doesnt have a grand aim after all

Legion is it red demon or blue demon?Can you fix this typo?

That was unexpected

I think story is shifting from griffon kingdom to other ones.Even if jirni survives ernas family will be kicked out from the kingdom. And if lith loses ernas he has no reason to stay in griffon kingdom.He has no political friends so its pretty risky to stay in the griffon kingdom.So we have similar options Option A:Jirni dies orion and lith kill deirus kicked out of the kingdom then they refuge to blood desert.Or lith refuse blood desert because of balkor and strict rules and move to the gorgon empire. Option B:Jirni survives ernas family run from griffon kingdom to wait a opportunity.Then we are gonna wait for balkor copycat actions. I hope story moves to gorgon empire so lith can train swordskills with jakra.

Man why did you add the first girl back to the story?Shouldnt novels contain bit of sadness comedy and love so it makes the story meaningful.Is this gonna be like fairy tale where everything goes well for the protagonist.Well at least for me this is a pretty sad development for the novel.

How does faluel knows that mogar alter his bloodline?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon