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transition is a change in something. a transaction is an exchange

His legal transition, non-legal transition, Yu Qi copied everything. Yu Qi would go through the information when she got time later.

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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years? you mean the 1 right? 1 year in university

As for Meng Qiang Su, she didn't know why Meng Qiang Su would want to do that. Their encounter was two years ago And it was only that one time. Was Meng Qiang Su still held the grudge about it after all these years?

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Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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"want" should be removed from the 3rd sentence

'Master, don't worry. You can choose whatever you want. Space allows you want to enter with your body or only your consciousness. Well, if you want to improve your body, it's better to enter it with your body. Here, we have a lot of books to improve your body. If you only want to study, you may enter with your consciousness." Bo Ya explained.

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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"going to do" and "can not help" or "will not help"

'Master, what are you doing to do if your boss could not help you?' The question from Bo Ya made her stop.

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Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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The last sentence is a little off. It should say "She could not do anything at all at the time" or "...in all that time"

Actually, Yu Qi did not know why Wang Fu Ya ignited those girls until she heard the conversation between Wang Fu Ya and Wang Ha Na. They spoke about her grade getting worse after the bullying. She could not do anything at all that time.

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Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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"I am really come back" should be "I have really come back" or "I really am back"

"Yeah, thank you, Bo Ya. I will come back tomorrow." She closed her eyes. In the blink of eye, she was already in her room when she opened back her eyes. 'I am really come back. I never thought that I would get something like this cheat. This is going to be fun.'

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Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

General · ZerahNeko

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loaned should be borrowed

"Three months ago, your father became injured. To save him, your brother loaned five gold coins to hire doctors. Now, with all the interest, he owes us 100 gold coins."

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws

History's Strongest Son-In-Law Living With The In-Laws

Eastern · Silent Cake

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mysterious is an adjective. it should either be a mystery or another noun should be there as well

Yin Yue looked at Gu Hai and said, "How can you do that? Everyone has their own path in life. There's no need to force things." Then, she said to Jiang Ming, "The Tower of Trials is a mysterious 

10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start

10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start

Eastern · Li Baijin

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"Stunningly" is an adverb, which is used to describe or emphasize a verb, and isn't normally used by itself. "Stunned" would be appropriate
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I Can Claim Daily Rewards

I Can Claim Daily Rewards

Urban · Malignant

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The structure is just different from the norm. "Have a coffee chat" should be "have a chat over coffee"

After staying in the study for two minutes, Leo said, "Since there is no problem with the installation, let's go down and have a coffee chat."

Dragon Abyss Online:I start selling intelligence after reaching lvMAX

Dragon Abyss Online:I start selling intelligence after reaching lvMAX

Fantasy · Wind_itself

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"to loan" is to give away for a period of time, while "to borrow" is to receive for a period of time. Maybe I'm not understanding correctly but it's a big distinction

"By the way, I heard that you loaned three A-Class awakeners for a month. Does your guild have enough funds? Mors Industries hasn't created or sold anything yet." Steve gave Klaus a skeptical look.

Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Fantasy · mozziexxxx

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