Eh... It's got potential. I'll read it as it comes out and stone it like an infidel when I can. It might be a good idea to find a character motivation or objective. That sort of thing isn't necessary of course but, if the plot turns into a confused loop and you accidentally slip unsuitable decisions/actions in then it can make being a reader painful if you don't fix it with a sneaky personal dilemma arc.
Mr_Bork