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I love this work and hope it has long journey of stable updates.

Hey i am a new reader of the book and i want to know if the author forgot about the books and diary he found in the room of requirements

After reading today's i chapter i thought it's my duty to add an honest 5 star review

I've started reading and reached chapter 30 and so far i love it initially i was discouraged because of some reviews and Author explaining himself again and again BUT seriously so far it's fantastic and FOR THE RECORD it fanfiction ( so why do you need some elaborate explanation for everything HATE COMMENTERS)

Its fun and light hearted themed work and if you are not ANALYSING MISTAKES/NITPICKING and just want to read this great work i TOTALLY RECOMMEND it. AUTHOR please please don't drop this book. (i am gonna bring out the gun[img=update])

One of the best work in the currently updating books and so far i have no complaints (maybe because i have no knowledge other then MCU) but i hope you continue this work and don't drop etc Also please maintain the regular updates. P.S: Mainy of my fellow reader's who has knowledge of comics etc please avoid the nitpicking every little detail and timelines etc because of which most author's drop or rewrite. P.P.S: i love this work and recommend everybody give it a read it's very entertaining

Honestly started off as one of the great works similar to many but the character of the Mc is extremely shaky and full of inconsistency and randomness. Like if the MC is growing socially it should follow that trend but no it suddenly devolves into childishness. Growing intelligence ok good it great but suddenly it like he is high but then again suddenly mastermind level genius wow. Sorry for the rant but to anyone who is gonna read it I WOULD DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT BUT PLEASE BEAR WITH IT AFTER THE STARTING CHAPTERS. anyway i am not gonna quit this because the plot and everything else is interesting so KUDOS but i hope the character is more mature and show consistent growth towards intelligence for the second Arc. Start of first Arc 10/10 Middle of first Arc Meh End of First Arc 7/10 Overall Story and concept 9/10

I don't want to find missing loopholes etc but considering the MC is a former human and working adult shouldn't at least some caution be observed by him like when he first received souls or holy fragment or whatever he should try to have a concealing skill or something instead of looking for cool factors even when he knows the dangers of his world.