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Moments 8
2yr
Commented you can't just introduce a new power boost with no side effects and not explain why he didn't use this one instead when he was powerless. This is terrible storytelling, simply pulling this technic from no where is already bad enough and you can't even explain why it was first revealed now???
ch 113 Special Technique
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Action · Riixhiie
2yr
Commented perfect opportunity to kidnap the daughter of another great family???? Is this guy stupid or is the author just bad at storytelling. I honestly don't know why I'm enjoying this series despite how brain dead it often is.
"Uncle Shan, why didn't you get rid of that bastard?! We could have easily taken Wanying without anyone noticing! It was the perfect opportunity!" Ze Long barked fiercely at Ze Shan as he was forced to leave the site.
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Action · Riixhiie
2yr
Commented "on the mainland" implies there are islands which hasn't been indicated at all in the story. It makes no sense to use this term instead of just saying in the city.
ch 66 The Tang Family Happiness (2)
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Action · Riixhiie
2yr
Commented "I compromise you to my daughter" makes no sense.... Please learn the definition of the words you're using and find example sentences of their use before trying to include them in the story. it's frustrating having to figure out what you mean from context when you keep doing this. another example was "skeptical day" which you used some chapters earlier which also doesn't make sense, even if it was a typo for special the context makes that an awkward use of the word special.
ch 64 Engagement?
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Action · Riixhiie
2yr
Commented This author really needs to learn the definition of the words they're using. "compromise you to me daughter" makes no sense. it's not even a simple typo as they use the exact same word later.
"So... how about I compromise you to my daughter?" Tang Zhi threw out what she had planned.
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Action · Riixhiie
Rayunar
"Mmm, I have mastered it perfectly..." Ling Tian nodded and remembered when he faced Cerberus. He had to use the technique "Celestial Energy Mastery" in order to overcome the power emitted by that demonic beast. Because he was just in the Peak Stage of Chi Gathering, he could use it to increase his power a little more. That's why in the end, he was too exhausted when he killed the demon beast and entered his little world.
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Action · Riixhiie