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Mc is evil, he eventually instructs his AI to research ways to enslave people.

Not even a couple chapters in and hes already the strongest being to ever exist. Which is fine sometimes, but then randomly he gets into a fight with his sister because shes curious about what hes hiding in his room, then out of nowhere he creates a mind raoe skill then turns her into his slave.

While the story and world are interesting, it comes with the huge baggage of needlessly long paragraphs filled with unwanted information and monologues. It incredibly difficult to read, its mostly tangents of the main character explaining things that have nothing to do with the story. A cursory review by the author cutting out the unnecessary bit would probably make this a great story. Even just breaking uo the long paragraphs to no more than 5-7 lines would make it easier to read.

Its starts out pretty chill. Then they introduce some evil young master type character that clearly deserves death, but for sone reason the mc doesnt kill him? Its not really explained that well. Also, I find it unrealistic the 2 high school kids cant report this guy and his family to authorities. On top of that theres supposedly 400mill people and somehow only 3 S Rankers in japan? Unrealistic again.

MC wishes for wisdom and knowledge. Gets debuffed to omniscience(knowing everything), but somehow he still knows nothing(?). Oh and from another comment, The author kills the MCs family later on. It feels a bit lovecraftian. So unless you can put up with those things, the story probably isnt for you.

A system shop novel where the system abuses its host for whatever perceived slight. A couple chapters in and its mostly just the author using the system to punish the MC for asking simple questions, tortuing the MC for being upset with it, and ripping the MCs hard work off.