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One of the most trash novels I have read so far. I tried to get back to reading it for like 2 times maybe but I just couldn't get past 200. The magic system is interesting..but the mc? Absolute garbage. I have never felt such disgust for a character and for the author who writes such characters. When someone's familiar gets beaten(a very faithful one who got hurt disengaging a move from a 'beauty') one will feel anger or at least give a just response. But what this mc does, use his other magic to survive and act cool..he doesn't even lay a single hand on her.. he goes towards the girls and acts cool..and the girls blushes. The nearly puked at that moment.. and the sides characters response. Like the fatty's salivating from mouth,nose andwhat not over the beauty of the goddess.. And every important plot there will be a cold beauty ready for him to impress. The thought process of the author is disgusting. Once or twice is fine, but at every other scene?. And stop rating it high or believing in fake reviews. It is just a filth better left untouched.

I was really invested, so I hope things get fixed. I ll surely come back to it since I like the the leveling and growth of our slimey mc. Keep improving

The story started well, had some world background, mc making though not the best but just somewhat reasonable choices(like not focusing on skills and focusing on leveling up) but it can be somewhat ignored. So it continues like that for a while until the part where he evolves into a spiritas. I don't know how a character can change so drastically. I have read some really horrible books but even they don't have such a drastic change in character in a single chapter. One moment he is a somewhat intelligent stick and then next moment he is a stuttering idiot who (it is then mentioned that he is a 16 y old virgin) loses the ability to think and reveals every bit of his secrets to someone he just met (just because he thinks that they are 'compatriots' and totally were not forcing him a moment ago). Tells them that he is getting skills knowing fully well that it will be tough to explain how he knows the details and yet revealing it very easily, as easy as breathing. (Why do you want to go to the ruin ? Oh, nothing much. Just want to get some op skills that I can keep to myself for some advantage but now I telling you this because you are my friend and don't ask why I know,not telling you ). And when asked about is he is blessed by a god, he easily reveals it and even goes on to tell his story pretty eagerly and with great details(since they are compatriots of course). He reveals to a stranger he met some time ago about secrets one would take it to their graves, like being a human and getting reincarnated. Anyway, if it wasn't enough to leave a bad taste we have a mc who gets flustered by imaginging stick on stick when Herelia or something mentions something and behaves just how I imagine a 16y old would be and then we learn that he is a 16y old virgin. See, I have no problem with any kind of stick and personally love it but was it really needed to make the mc be a 16 y old virgin just for the sake of having a reason to be flustered?. From the start of the story I was expecting the mc to be 21 or older guy since he was behaving in a somewhat rational way?. Anyway, I think this is my second time reading it. The first time I read this was a long ago. It was these few chapters where he met Herelia that bothered me so much with the drastic character changes that I dropped it. And after so long I tried it again, I really wanted to give it a chance, read from the beginning..I really tried. But this part again made it so much unbearable for me to continue even a sentence. I really felt my brain throb and stop with every word I read( mostly how easily he revealed everything to a stranger where he could answer with a yes). I love books. When you invest so much feelings and time into something and get smacked straight on your face with something illogical and irrational, it really makes you doubt your life for a second. The author seems nice enough to take criticism in a good way, so I hope they improve because we really need some good writers. Every story I read leaves me with so much disappointment and unmet expectations, it is heartbreaking

The book was doing so well with the character development and everything but the recent chapters aren't good in comparison to how the book started. When Resh got his memory back, the change in character was too abrupt but understandable. But what is this sudden realisation and system messages of starting a new life. This is ridiculous. If you wanted to change the thought process of the character just do so with logic and good plot. But don't just bring those cliches of system giving them a notification about some random skills to start a new life. And change in mentality doesn't happen just because of few random system notifications. Seriously? I was expecting a lot from you, since I liked the book was progressing but seeing how the mc is behaving.... And the recent blunder of sleeping on a gryphon knowing very well that the humans were riding it a moment ago. Our very human mc goes straight on top of that animal without any regard for his tiny self that can be obliterated with a single scratch of the animal. Okay, I can understand that this is a mythical creature so he got excited and all and can somewhat be understandable. But that wasn't all the mc did. He fn slept on the creature. When I read it, it sounded so ridiculous. I moment I read it I knew where this story was going. He will be found by the humans who rode the gryphons, and some new story will start. :) . Even his earlier not so aware slime self which didn't have much brain power could process what should be done and what will bring danger. I just can't get it what the writer is thinking making such abrupt change in character and such disregard for life. 99% of the recent chapters are about him contemplating life and talking about this is gross or that is gross and about skill descriptions. I had so high expectations when I first started, now I am just disappointed.

The story development is nice and all.. the mc is believes in using his head more often than fists. So far the world building is going fine too. The only problem I have is with the way you describe every little action. Some places where questions need not be asked, they are still added making it unnecessary. Like if Lucian reached a door, he will ask Kiana- I guess this is the place. The mc doesn't need confirmation from his Kiana for every little things. Somethings can be written in a simple way- Kiana bring me some food. We don't always need the conversation of - I am feeling a bit hungry, should we have our food now? Lets head out then.. I feel like that 80% of the texts in the story are conversations like that. It has been like 250 something chapters but I feel like I read about 50 chapters. Whatever was written can be compressed in such low amount of chapters. I don't hate more descriptive stories but there is a balance between too much and too little. Well I understand the need to keep up the word count and the need for new ideas. But having a scene stretched on for like 10 chapters isn't fun. The brewery plan itself took like I don't know how many chapters. Three chapters were of him going there to check on the brewery and another chapter was about the the brewery is working. Details are good but unnecessary details makes me want to skip paras after paras. So I hope the author can change this. Sometimes I can literally feel my heart burn with how slow things are.

I don't understand how people can give this 5 stars. Do they not read or are they just glossing over the chapters without really reading and then in the comments they yell- so awesome novel, so good, I am gonna c** reading about such a good mc, etc. I can understand that sometimes reading a book and seeing that the potential plot could be remarkable makes you turn a blind to little errors. But the mc itself is the main error. There were so many chapters where I felt like puking blood if I could, just to get past those chapters.

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You lost me here.. I don't understand why all authors have to go with cliche plots to introduce female characters or love interests. Stop, get some help.. mimic allowing itself to be pet so easily by a random girl and the guy talking about random stuff about science that the girl seemed to have understand everything and even apply it to counter the mc. And how the mc is a whole rank above her but he still gets played around everytime he fights with a girl. I still remember the fight with sonia. How he kept getting so 'SURPRISED' and had to resort to so much effort to defeat her. Like seriously if you had to give him a friend, a normal and more logical plot and characters will suffice. By doing this unnecessary stuff you are killing your readers interest. A guy who hardly gets influenced by emotions loses it when he sees his long lost buddy Aaron and continues to lose his brain where there is a possibility of him losing his life. Nice character development.. I am impressed.. bye.

No prob.. keep progessing. Hope your next book will be more experienced one considering this book gave you enough practice. Also try to stay far away from Chinese, japanese,korean cliches. Have a good day. Hugs.

Agreed. Things are making hardly any sense. So many errors.. some can be dismissed cause even authors are human and can make mistakes. But the story totally took a u curve. It started so well and made me hold great expectations. It was steady for some time then it started degrading rapidly with too many plotholes..