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Quick thing I figured I should mention since I’m enjoying this story. The sentence “I still don’t know why should I give you one” should have the “I” and the “should switched. In english, an indirect question follow the order of subject (I) then the verb (should). A lot of non-native speakers of english end up screwing this up and its one of those small things that are simple to fix, but are just super common.

"That's a good point," Mark finally admitted after taking some time to consider my words. "But I still don't know why should I just give you one," he spoke. "Those things do not come cheap," he added while spreading his arms out.

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Thanks for the chapter. Sorry for all the complaining.

ch 289 Unrivalled Will

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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A total massochist.

"Pain is but a fleeting feeling..." Atlas muttered as the pain reached its peak.

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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This makes no sense.

It's more stupid proof than stupid proof.

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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2mth

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Plz explain. I an so confused. This sentence makes no sense.

Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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Or maybe you’re saying that the Sagittarius A* Black Hole at the center of this galaxy of printers has been replaced with a massive printer?

Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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Are you saying that there is a galaxy with stars that have been replaced with massive star sized printers? If this is what you’re saying, then that means for a galaxy the size of the milky way the MC has 100 BILLION printers. Ignoring that the Milky Way is a “relatively” larger galaxy, the smallest know galaxy has 1000 stars. Plz, author, give us decent numbers. This just isn’t an acceptible comparison.

Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.

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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR

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Just gotta point something out because I’m pedantic: “calmest air within a 1 million light years in diameter” indicates to me that there is a circle with a diameter of 1 million lightyears, which means that the radius of this circle is 500,000 LY in diameter, meaning that there is no calmer area of the sea within a range of 500,000 LY of the Eternal Voyager. This sentence is midly confusing.