Filodir_Maskov

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ch 0 7 Prologue 7: I find myself sympathizing

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

"I am all too aware of the great burden placed on my shoulders, and I am all too aware of the great pains that my subjects have to bear because of this war." The actor speaks solemnly, with a voice full of weight and power, and maybe even a little bit of shame.

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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grt chp

ch 0 6 Prologue 6: I find myself getting distracted

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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maybe you just don't know about the profession you would be passionate about?

Gah! It just doesn't click. I can keep going through every profession in the world, but it's just a big, far no in my heart. And it's not like this is the first time either. I have thought about these things so many times already. It was part of the 'finding my missing pieces' quest. I never got anywhere.

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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… What a drag!

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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let's go

"Alright, you bitch, just wait a goddamn second here!" Even I'm surprised at how vitriolic my voice comes out.

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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wow, that was not the attitude change i was expecting from her

"I see you have some skills." She says, returning back to her arrogant attitude. "Would have been nicer if you would have just displayed it earlier instead of standing there like a brainfriend monkey for a full minute."

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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good chapter.

ch 0 5 Prologue 5: I find myself confused

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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fine, i like it too

ch 0 4 Prologue 4: I find myself alone

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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I am everything, and I am nothing.

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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relatable, haha

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Filodir_Maskov

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we HAVE got a fiesty one here.

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Filodir_Maskov

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not the best options, i have to say

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Filodir_Maskov

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I think this sentence needs to be rewritten.

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The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

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Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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Simply because it feels pathetic to do so. Laugh if it seems funny or immature but I don't want to feel like a parasite who can only survive by using her as a host.

The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods

Fantasy · VoxEnozian

Filodir_Maskov

1yr

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then why not do it?

I'm not dense enough to not understand how important this woman is. I'm also not stupid enough to not know how easy my life will become if I start throwing around the fact that we have a good relationship.