Webnovel Author: Vara_ - Novel Collection

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

There are complaints about the length of the synopsis but that'll be fixed in due time. The first 5 Chapters of the book was written at a very young age and I haven't been able to fully edit them. I hope you see some changes in the remaining chapters. Thank you!

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

A man in a relationship, I know, actually said this to his girlfriend.

Joel pops his head from the kitchen where he just finished eating dinner. "Hey piece of shit, dinner was good today. The kitchen is dirty, go clean it up."

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

It's just an intro on the ML. As the story progresses, he'll describe himself.

Xavier Morreti is the stereotypic billionaire CEO. He fits the perfect drop-dead gorgeous playboy who could get whatever he wanted with the snap of his finger. All this were true, except for one thing. He couldn't get 'everything' he wanted. He wants release, badly. Release, both sexually and emotionally. He is almost desperate. His manhood would hurt once in a while. He had even gone to the hospital for a checkup but they say nothing wrong. He is bothered.

Sugary Onyx

Urban · Vara_

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

Lol. It's just 3 sentences and a short one. Thanks

After she is done, she decides to get prepared for work. She lets down her long curly hair-that stops below her butt-hoping that it would cover her now bandaged temple. And it did, as usual. She dresses in her work clothes then rides her bicycle down to the restaurant she waits for, but that was not after preparing lunch because if she didn't, Joel would flip and probably finish the job this time.

Sugary Onyx

Urban · Vara_

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

I get what you mean but... moving it to a new paragraph confuses.

She remains on the cold floor some more before she wills her body to move from the floor to the attic where she gets cleaning materials to clean off the blood from the floor, according to Joel's words; "Clean this floor because it's more expensive than 15 of you, freak." Then he stormed out. That was 3 hours ago.

Sugary Onyx

Urban · Vara_

Vara_

3yr

Replied to Suigetsu_yolo_9736

I meant to use italics and bold but Webnovel doesn't have those features.

But, you know what? It is okay. My boyfriend loves me, she thought. It had been, yet again, a mistake. Joel came back drunk and asked for sex, which Natalie would have gladly given if she wasn't so sore and ached bad. And right there and then, he didn't have to go to the gym.

Sugary Onyx

Urban · Vara_

Vara_

3yr

Posted

Incredible synopsis! Amazing plotline... I love Hitomi as a character! I'm tempted to reveal spoilers but I'm not that mean. lol😂 awaiting your next update!

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Action · JP_TransLaLa

Vara_

3yr

Commented

Player? That sounded so slick l😂

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The Isekai Game: Odin's Eye

Action · Craig_Watson

Vara_

3yr

Commented

Player? That sounded so slick😂

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The Isekai Game: Odin's Eye

Action · Craig_Watson

Vara_

3yr

Commented

shit's getting real

ch 0 2 All Pain

The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

it's okay... It's fine. (hiring assassins for our lovely Author)

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The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

O.o keyuuuute!

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The Unveiled Chronicles: Oliphym

Fantasy · _ArchKingLynis_

Vara_

3yr

Posted

Adeline is my hot bae! I love the storyline! When I added this book in my library and read the first two Chapters, I was like... WOAH! why haven't I read this before! I love the character's personality. There are punctuation errors and a slight default in POVs but that's something you can work on! So Author, Get prepared! 'cos you have a loyal fan to spam you silly comments! [img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]

The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

You monster! But he sounds hot so I'll let it pass, this time.[img=faceslap]

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The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

Swoon swoon. Somebody catch me!

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The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

You mighty ****er! Let me at him!

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The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

No! Erwin 😭

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The Bride of The Second Prince (English)

Fantasy · Aliyah_Jasmine

Vara_

3yr

Commented

Just a little suggestion: Do not place a full-stop after a question mark. The question mark already has its own point. It's like writing two full-stops at the end of the sentence. 👍