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A unique story. An oc Nara that's basically a genuis/prodigy with monstrous never-before-seen talent and bloodline. Characters are fleshed out fairly well, plot is coherent and worldbuilding seems to be great. Powerful levels are semi-defined, which i love. Overall, a great story. My critique for now is how the reactions and behaviours of some characters don't necessarily match my expectations of the actual characters in the actual anime. But i guess that's why this is a fanfiction.

Great novel. Nice integration with real world factors. Great character development and progression of storyline. Some mini plot lines are not expounded upon clearly, however it's still a satisfying and enjoyable read.

mmhmmn...

It looked like it might have been a bit interesting. Until I actually started to read it. The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par. Needs a lot of improvement. . . . .

An interesting read. MC is kinda not too sharp and slow to act. Love the originality of the characters though. Great work but chapters are very short.

Expertly written. I love the MC; genius, vengeful and absolutely cunning. The whole story comes together well enough with the right amount of humour and intrigue.