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Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!

It was sublime from start to finish. Thank you so much author for allowing us to read such a good fanfic! I never got bored following Quinn West, I hope to read more about him in the future. A hug to the author! P.S. I look forward to finding out who got his wand.

Damn it! It was better than the original hahahaha. I say this because I read the whole novel and honestly I couldn't stand Rudeus's personality, for me the mana catastrophe leaves a very bitter taste in my mouth, because despite being very important to the plot, it ends up destroying (In the case of canonical) things that were absurdly important to me, such as family dynamics and the exploration of the fittoa region, which was very picturesque. I hope the author can continue to write, I look forward to continuing to read the story. Thanks for writing this fanfic!

(small spoiler) Zaos accepted his bastard sister, because he understands that it's not her fault, but he has a lot of resentment from his father for betraying his mother. Lyra had a very big shock which in turn ended up impacting her health (which was already fragile). The development is much more complex, I tried to give a summary of this part of the story, I guarantee that the end will leave you very shaken. Happy reading my friend!

I'm sorry I didn't quite understand your question (English is not my mother tongue, I may be failing in the translation since I use the help of Google Translate), when you refer to the half-sister you are talking about the second daughter of Zaos' father ?

The story is very good to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapters with enthusiasm. Thanks for the content author, keep up the good work. I hope Lord Vader is truly powerful.

The author is to be congratulated, the story is very good to read! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapters. As a fan I wanted him to team up with Padmé as their separation in canon is very sad. I'm sure the author will get the plot right.

There is no Harem, these female characters are important for the development of Zaos. Of course, in the end he ends up having a love relationship with just one woman, although at first I thought he would end up having a romance with the princess.

The work is simply sublime! Lyra is the best character, too bad she left us early, but she never let us down! The author is to be congratulated, job very well done. I know the story is good when I feel part of my soul leaving with its ending, the ending is also perfect! My thanks to the author. I will miss Lyra, Ameria, Milliandra and Aleni. My only sadness is not seeing Aleni's children.

A história tinha potencial, mas o personagem é muito manipulado e não tem um único interesse romântico durante toda a obra. infelizmente sinto que a leitura foi só pra passar o tempo, não deixou nenhuma impressão em mim. O final é péssimo, da a entender que todo o personagem ,que já é bem raso e otário, foi perdido na batalha final. Fico triste por ter acabado assim, talvez com algum romance e um pouco mais de desenvolvimento emocional e interpessoal do Benjamin e daqueles que estão a sua volta tivesse sido melhor. Outro ponto muito mal desenvolvido foi a família Lithur que simplesmente foi jogada no lixo. Um pai "Duro e sério" que no fim não conseguiu fazer nada para mudar o seu destino e o da família e a mãe que não quase não tem personalidade teve um maldito surto e foi abandonada pra não voltar mais. Acho que das últimas leituras que tive essa foi a que mais me deixou puto com o desenvolvimento, sei que o autor escreve o que quer, mas o fim foi realmente uma bosta. Se você for ler, leia sem esperar muita coisa e se prepare para muitas referências chinesas, já que o outro é chinês.

Does the author still intend to continue writing?? The story is really good, I can't wait for the sequel. The only criticism I have is about the author of allying with leluch, it would be much nicer if they were rivals. And maybe you've weakened the emperor too much, julius will run out of good enemies.

For sure! Few authors explore Grindelwald, and those who do often end up creating boring and predictable plots. This story manages to be captivating, I particularly like it a lot.

The story so far has been fun and interesting to read pity it only has 8 chapters and is relatively short. Did the author drop the story or is it still going to update?

It's probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. It's a shame it is not updated anymore, I believe there was still a lot of potential.

Hello writer! beforehand I notice that there will probably be spelling errors in this comment (I'm Brazilian and my first language is Portuguese, I had help from Google translator). About the story: It's fun to read and I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. Thank you for writing this story. A few more particular comments if you're interested: I think the protagonist is a bit lacking in personality, just motivated by hate or whatever, I'm saying that because I feel like he might end up being uninteresting. (If it's something necessary for the base of the plot I can only wait, but I recommend giving a boost to his character, he's kind of simple) And I'm 100% in favor of Xenophobia against other species, I think this theme is very naive in star wars. And it would be interesting to somehow "convert" padme (I'm sorry if I seem intrusive in your novel, but she's one of my favorite characters in SWs) to the side of human "purity" and maybe put them as a romantic pair ( it might be interesting to add one more "competitor" to "spice up" things hahahahah). As for the rest of the galaxy for me they can burn.

Hi, the story so far has been very interesting to read, although I have some doubts about some of the MC's choices, but I'll keep watching. A plea from a lost webnovel reader: don't pair him up with someone from dorne. Keep up your good work! just post more if possible. A hug from Brazil.

I particularly liked the story, of course it still has a lot of room to evolve. has it been a while since the last chapter, did the author give up on the work?