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pqhdehzuen

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2020-04-14 Joined United States

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pqhdehzuen
Replied to Pyoug
i*k
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okkk mann

okkk mann

Others · Pyoug

pqhdehzuen
Replied to Quartz_Quill
nah, i understood. just being a smartass. :)
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I'm the King Of Technology

I'm the King Of Technology

Fantasy · lumydee

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Replied to Elijah_0348
wdym? levels are always really easy to get in the beginning.

"Hmmm..it seems my body here still can't keep up. It just shows that this still a game. It seems levelling is still a must and I only gained 50 Exp from killing these wolves, looking at how low the Exp. on killing these monsters just made me realized that getting a level is hard, it seems there will be a lot of people that would be stuck below Level 5 in the upcoming days" Michael sighed as he looked at his Exp bar that was only halfway full.

Fate Online: Shadow

Fate Online: Shadow

Games · ApocalypseX

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Replied to pqhdehzuen
lol, in hindsight this explanation is kinda bad. what i was trying to say is that he was finding out the process using the input and output. so then he can apply that process somewhere else.

After sometime Sam abruptly stood up as an idea came. 'What if I divide them individually?' Sam thought as looked at the inscription circle in his note book. The runes with in the gap between the inscription circle are all connected in some way. 'If I look at the runes as a gear train and look at the whole resulting energy flow as the final gear ratio, then each rune will be an individual pair of gears in mesh. That means just as input gear and output gears rotate in different speeds, then input of energy flow for the rune is the speed of the input gear and the output of the energy flow is the speed of the output gear. Then the difference in the energy flow between the input and output of the energy flow can be termed as the individual gear ratio. Then just like how in a gear ratio, it is possible to obtain the final gear ratio from the product of all the gear ratios of the pairs in the mesh, the total energy flow and change in that energy nature to perform a successful inscription will be the product of the changes in the energy flow in the runes.'

Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer

Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer

Fantasy · Suryaboddu

pqhdehzuen
Replied to giggspixels
yes, but why not even a little variation. like xX_l0ng-dO|\|Gr_Xx
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Haven Online

Haven Online

LGBT+ · Momocatt

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Replied to THR3AT77
OH NO
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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Replied to Aurora_Blue
sorry, I'll correct myself. the king is the most important ASPECT of the game. in chess tempo, space, position, tactics and material are all just means to an end to checkmate the king.

"I can't take any risk, you are my most important chess piece…" Felix said as he dragged Max along. There was a bit of guilt in his voice too, but most of it seemed to be the truth.

The Ancient Genes

The Ancient Genes

Fantasy · ReincarnatedSaint

pqhdehzuen
Replied to Stephan_B
here is the sauce Yome no Manimani - Chapter 9 Artist: YU (優風) Author: YU (優

The ninth was a woman with a sharp gaze, a killer body, and dark brown skin. "I am Asha, a half-human, half-succubus Master Rank Courtesan. It is a pleasure to meet you Clan Master. I have to say your scent is intoxicating." 

Guild Wars

Guild Wars

Games · Kotario

pqhdehzuen
Replied to NeroLotus
but still. 4/20 = 1/5. thats 20% gay.
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Haven Online

Haven Online

LGBT+ · Momocatt

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Replied to AshLeen
actually it's not a metaphor it's a simile. metaphors don't have "like" or "as".
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Soon blood rushed to the face and the most private parts of the young and pure maidens, making them bloom like red roses.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

pqhdehzuen
Commented
you should set room for character development. give the characters flaws but don't make them annoying. also some world building. think about politics, geography, economy, customs, society, etc. also watch out for clichés some things like system and herem can be really good but also can be really bad depending on the skill of the author. another thing you can do is keep a stable upload schedule. even if it's once or twice a month. you can also read books with the same genre is this to get some ideas. for example, Supreme Magus is a really good book to take inspiration from it has good character development, world building and fantastic explanations on how magic and other things we don't have here works. sorry for the novel.
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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Replied to pqhdehzuen
*names
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Haven Online

Haven Online

LGBT+ · Momocatt

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Several metallic pillars were erected on the four corners of the building and finally, an electric spark started to fill the entire area. Arcs of lightning came forth from the pillars which attacked any unidentified metals on the area.

New Game+

New Game+

Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales

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Replied to THR3AT77
that's not what absorb means. absorb means to "take in or soak up (energy or a liquid or other substance) by chemical or physical action." this doesn't necessarily mean it has to demateralise. also "obsorb" isn't a word.
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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Replied to THR3AT77
oof. hope your can afford a new computer soon. :)
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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Commented
*absorb
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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Commented
*no one idk if its just me but noone looks kinda weird. also google seems to agree with me: https://***.grammarly.com/blog/no-one-noone/ https://***.grammar.com/no_one_vs._noone
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Fantasy · THR3AT77

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oh, nvm

"You can't put discreet and massacre in one sentence, Arthur."

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Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales

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not really, if no one is alive to see them it's discreet.

"You can't put discreet and massacre in one sentence, Arthur."

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Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales

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Commented
why is everyone gay? not homophobic just asking.
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Haven Online

Haven Online

LGBT+ · Momocatt

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