TonerSay - Profile

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Writing quality is what I would expect from Webnovel, it's easy to be read. At least, I don't have to open Google translate to read this book. Story development starts from very fast and slowed down pretty soon too, well, it's good since we know the MC is op. character design is average, can't say much with only four chapters around. Updating stability is average, but he published four chapters on the first day, so there's that. World background is still unclear, but I have an idea about how the world is in war and how the technology works there. example, because of magic, it doesn't make gunpowder obsolete.