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Nope..........................................................................................................................................

This story is very well written. It is executed well and the characters have real plot behind them. However there is the authors obvious disregard for religion in general that I personally don't approve of. Even if you are athiest doesn't mean you can insult religion. However, it is not everywhere and it is subtle, however it is there regardless. Not recommended to anyone who happens to be religion. However, it is a very well thought out story with good character and world building.

Honestly you did a good job balancing an "OP character". All of the trolls with nothing better to do than insult your story aren't worth even processing their opinions. Good luck, I hope you don't drop this just because of some stupid trolls.

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