Webnovel Author: Jack_Wilder - Novel Collection

Jack_Wilder

6d

Posted

hello. author here. I'm taking this chance to be a little more serious about why I am writing this story. I will let you decide if you want to read this. it isn't necessary for the story. just some thoughts. this story is near to my heart because it's supposed to journey of self discovery. I just feel like I could really show you guys this really beautiful world. I believe more then anything else the imagination is the strongest stage. I have spent like... 200 ish hours researching how to show not tell and I don't plan on not stopping that learning. I would really like for this story to do well because it would mean people are enjoying it. (it also helps with my biggest problem of motivation) ultimately I don't particularly care if this does well. as long as one person likes and enjoys it I think I'll be happy. i would love to hear your guy's thoughts on my story. I know it isn't perfect or very long right now. but I'm keeping a schedule for updates now. and I have been able to stick to it for a while. so keep following along. thank you for reading this. have a nice day.

Jack_Wilder

1mth

Commented

I find that hard to believe. everyone would have noticed. they are extremely prominent and something people's eyes would be drawn to.

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Jack_Wilder

1mth

Commented

Reminds me of a quote. "the only difference between a doctor and a necromancer is timing." I'm assuming that necromancy also includes healing magic here. which would make sense to me.

Some used their powers to heal the living and ensured that the dead were given proper burial and peacefully sent off to the afterlife. While other necromancers used their powers to cause chaos and destruction to society.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

Jack_Wilder

2mth

Commented

I agree. I also wouldn't see the big A right next to luck as I looked at my stats. and As I had to look RIGHT AT IT to get to my skills. sure I was complaining that my stats sucked. and I would absolutely want to know which one was my highest. but just like the main character. I'm just an idiot .

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Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

Jack_Wilder

2mth

Replied to KaranameKira

I'm not saying you are wrong... because you absolutely aren't wrong. but I would like to offer an answer... uh... um.... huh.... no I take it back.

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Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

Jack_Wilder

2mth

Commented

whaaaaaaaaaaaa- cheating? pfff. no~... you can't prove anything.

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Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

Jack_Wilder

2mth

Commented

Zeus actually isn't in charge of the Gods. and is not in fact in the overseerer. or all father. or anything like that. he is about 5 generation down from the top. and 3 generations down from the one who made the earth and sky (who are Zeus's grandparents.) so infact Zeus is only the current leader of his pantheon, the boss will always be mother earth, or Gaia. but then again this is a parody of the greek pantheon so uh... sure. in really nitpicky today. sorry author.

"If I am not the overseer of all, then thy birthright, thy essence, shall be forfeit..." Zeus proclaimed, hand rising, gathering a pulsing blue energy.

Succubus? Mermaids? Nymphs? - Eros levels up to immortality

Fantasy · Dark_knight234

Jack_Wilder

3mth

Replied to Grim_Reaper_73

tis true, I can't imagine a more perfect one.

Since two good looking humans were fooling around, a lot of curious gazes were thrown their way.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

3mth

Replied to Grim_Reaper_73

I have no words but I must respond...

Since two good looking humans were fooling around, a lot of curious gazes were thrown their way.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Posted

Two things honey and a hatchet. one this story is really good. it feels like... well real people, they act in ways they should and they feel like they are in love, like really in love, something a lot of "romance" writers don't actually do correctly, I was only going to read a chapter or two but I found myself really invested in the relationship between the too main characters. it's a joy to read and I highly recommend it. but there is the hatchet. the book is has terrible world building, which isn't a deal breaker as the characters are what in here for but there is a lot details that are only partially explained, and maybe the powers are only temporary? it's unclear on the book but there are hints both ways. I think it needed to be clearer the rules of the story, the stakes and the possible rewards, and most importantly the power system they use, we need to be able to understand how strong our protagonists are compared to everything that could harm them. and the school system needs some clarification, also note to the author, so spoilers from now on. short circuiting, you introduced it retroactively, which is something you shouldn't so often, you need your readers to trust you so when your plot twists happen you don't have them not believing you are going to retroactively give him/her a power up, you still can but be careful, reader trust is more important then any plot point, and another note, if you wrote a pure romance story without any r18 I'd definitely read it. I had to skip over those parts for personal reasons, so if you do end up making one in sure it will be great, thanks for making me smile and laugh the whole time, and good luck, I known you are going places

Carnal Cultivation

Fantasy · ASKeeling

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Commented

little did he know... HE is the cliché roommate with a mysterious background!!!

That's right, he didn't have a cliché roommate with a mysterious background and could instead move alone, freely.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Replied to Aady_Shrestha

who knows? maybe she is an emerald. this time.

Long wavy hair, brown locks, pink - plump lips, deep gray eyes with a hint of sky-blue in them, framed with a thick layer of dark, long lashes, Nia was like a goddess walking down the mortal world.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Commented

I too stare as attractive people. or I would if I ever left my house.

Since two good looking humans were fooling around, a lot of curious gazes were thrown their way.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Commented

my man, Lux think of it this way, you didn't get nothing. you got a tragic backstory, and that's all you need in this world.**probably

He and Nia were around 12 when the Ability Crisis began. It was just that Nia got a super strong Ability, while Lux got nothing.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Replied to Zefyr

More like a figurative machine gun of memes and references.

Commander Dima added in his mind, he was so amazed that he even forgot to use his SkyLimit bracelet to measure Light King's Power Level.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

4mth

Commented

it is probablyt a "his power level is over 9000!" joke the author didn't want to make.

Commander Dima added in his mind, he was so amazed that he even forgot to use his SkyLimit bracelet to measure Light King's Power Level.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

Jack_Wilder

5mth

Replied to Jack_Wilder

hey author here, guess what random person on the internet, I don't have any social media good luck trying to cancel me. mhuhahahaha!... sorry...

Bend, Don't Break.

Fantasy · Jack_Wilder

Jack_Wilder

3yr

Replied to Specops

i think it is more like this. if you get them down to 0hp you still need a finisher move to kill them otherwise they won't die.

Health: 9/10 (0,0016)

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

Jack_Wilder

3yr

Commented

solo leveling anyone.

"So I need to LVL UP quickly and defeat beasts to get my Aunt the healing pill" stated Adam.

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Fantasy · Adam_A

Jack_Wilder

3yr

Replied to hideyMcBigG

wrong again the botton is the most powerful person in the world.

Darius woke up the next day and headed to the library once again. The pursuit of knowledge was paramount to everything else, for the educated man was the most powerful man in the world.

Darius Supreme

Fantasy · Kotario

Webnovel Author: Jack_Wilder - Novel Collection

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Bend, Don't Break.

Only Wisdom Awakened

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Celestial Bloodline

Celestial Bloodline

Celestial Bloodline

Succubus? Mermaids? Nymphs? - Eros levels up to immortality

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Carnal Cultivation

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Bend, Don't Break.

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Darius Supreme

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