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_K_a_i_s_e_r_

_K_a_i_s_e_r_

female LV 1

✨Idk what I’m doing lol✨

2020-11-11 Joined United States

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Uhhhh wasnt his agility 0.36? Bruhhhh
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(A/N This is in no way foreshadowing… To be honest I haven't decided yet.)

Sudden monster.

Sudden monster.

Action · Godack

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Foreshadowing...
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<Whilst our monster friend was thinking he was also walking and paying attention to his surroundings. So far what he has seen were trees, rocks and some animals, nothing note worthy as of yet.>

Sudden monster.

Sudden monster.

Action · Godack

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Small edit for the first sentence of this paragraph, "It seem{s} that the animals haven't mutated..."
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Sudden monster.

Sudden monster.

Action · Godack

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Rich people and their crazy fashion sense. It was not his right to question these things.

The CEO's loser wife: Rebirth of the villainous queen of alchemy

The CEO's loser wife: Rebirth of the villainous queen of alchemy

Fantasy · Yolohy

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Thank you! I just fixed it ☺️✨
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I'm not sure why this paragraph ends with a "?"
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Consider changing the ending sentence with, "... she purposely landed on the ground, leaving her with a few bruises. Although they hurt, she was tougher than she looked..."
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The beginning of the paragraph is a little confusing, "...Time passed and the silence continued..."
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This sentence has some weird wording, my edit would be, "...Her soft voice rung throughout the air, making sure the coachman was able to hear it..."
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The last sentence of this paragraph is a little odd, it doesn't make much sense. Maybe change to, "...As time passed, she moved her gaze away from the sky and began to ponder..."
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Minor mistakes, "...It was a carriage from a prominent family, normal carriages wouldn't be decorated so exquisitely..."
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"Anna nodded her head in a yes."
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Annabelle Ashborn

Annabelle Ashborn

Fantasy · Dream_blue98

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Minor mistakes here and there, "Soon they reached the deepest part of the forest. The woman glanced at the girl and spoke, 'Now listen and look carefully.' The girl just nodded."
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Annabelle Ashborn

Annabelle Ashborn

Fantasy · Dream_blue98

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