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s2 man...

do you have any iq? honestly man... just read it. If that's what you think, I'm not going to make an effort to change the opinion of someone irrelevant to my life on the other side of the planet

I don't know if you understood... but it was a sarcastic comment. like, just reread

It would be a good story if there really was a sense of protagonism. Splitting the POVs by centering other people's point of view to take up more than 80% of the story is disastrous... No need for other people's POVs when this can be solved simply with third person POV, the author seems to want merge the concept of a novel with something like a book or movie, where there is not really a centralization of the characters in most cases. At least that's the point of view of someone who wouldn't even be able to identify the protagonist if the first 3 chapters are removed...

it's so frustrating it hurts... i've tried to get back to reading it after more than 6 months but it's impossible to read this...it's just not my taste. (Tag something relating to "hurt", "anguish", "suspense") My anxiety just keeps me from reading this in a way I can't explain, but well... the overall development sucks the only thing that saves the score for me is the impeccable quality of the writing, because otherwise... it even gives me physical pain

explained, explained... and in the end, he didn't explain a damn thing...

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tag missing (drama). In general, this story is forced and repetitive, in addition to the fact that the protagonists are not forcibly developed in the prologue for a reason (10 chapters of something that should be changeable, and bring mystery to the story, even allowing the "withdrawal of abilities from the ass ")... I don't see a way for such a protagonist to survive the games beyond the exaggerated "plot armor", because he has nothing unique... well, I read until the last chapter released so far and I stand by the same words for the rest of the story, in addition to adding a "system" that is basically useless, the mc's personality is inconsistent and meaningless, like someone with some severe mental illness and not someone with depression