Jack_Khotpratoom - Profile

the comic is great but it is skim worthy and can get a bit boring at parts while it doesvhavebgreat drawings Ibfeel thatbit could have had morensparks of detail and also the story developed quite quickly without givingbmuch detail ir back story of why he was chosen to have this system.The character design could have been better like he had an attribute in his mental or physical body that allowed him to get the system.