Catatafish

2mth

Commented

Yeah, British people never settled in North America. They are all native XD.

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Catatafish

1yr

Commented

The quest should be more embarissing/difficult for izumi (maybe some ecchi quest if you want the novel to go in that direction)

ch 0 5 Hm

Catatafish

1yr

Commented

That's the problem with harry potter SIs. Even if the mc is reincarnated as a house elf, they will inevitably become heir of merlin, morgana and slytherin.

ch 0 9 The Heir With Only a Title

Catatafish

2yr

Commented

why the black flames? now everyone in konoha should believe that itachi killed some academy student. why didn't she just arrange an accident or frame someone else?

ch 0 6 6-=A poem=-

That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime In Naruto World

Anime & Comics · Joao132135

Catatafish

2yr

Replied to Anastaxius

would be at least original. i've never seen a god-like cultivator with realtionship problems.they are always just 'heavenly' beautiful and everyone loves them without question. boring imho

Author's note: Do you prefer a kind of harem romance where Xia Zilin and Tan Yanyan only love Song Yu Qi or do you prefer them to become a throuple (the three of them love each other equally)?

It’s Not Easy to Be a Girl in a Cultivation World

Eastern · EagleSword

Catatafish

2yr

Commented

You should make it as messy as possible in my opinion, because real relationships are like that (e.g. Tan Yanyan getting jealous, Xia Zilin doesn't want to share mc, mc sleeps with Tan Yanyan too and breaks Xia Zilin's heart, Tan Yanyan tries to steal mc from Xia Zilin and they become enemies, ...)

Author's note: Do you prefer a kind of harem romance where Xia Zilin and Tan Yanyan only love Song Yu Qi or do you prefer them to become a throuple (the three of them love each other equally)?

It’s Not Easy to Be a Girl in a Cultivation World

Eastern · EagleSword

Catatafish

2yr

Replied to Legacy_24

mmh, i don't care that much but they seem to have an emotional attachment in this chapter and it makes the whole horecrux thing in harry much more dramatic. also the whole dumbledore thing makes an interesting conflict - dumbledore wanting them together to manipulate harry and their relationship based on distrust of him and harry trying to protect his girlfriend from him.

ch 22 Chapter 21 - The boy who cares

Harry Potter and the Chosen One

Book&Literature · Legacy_24

Catatafish

2yr

Replied to Legacy_24

How about this: - arya was gay in her past life and assumed she is still gay (and has a short relationship with hermione or daphne) but then finds out that she is now straight or -arya gets in a relationship with harry finds out that she is gay and then gets together with daphne

ch 22 Chapter 21 - The boy who cares

Harry Potter and the Chosen One

Book&Literature · Legacy_24

Catatafish

2yr

Commented

I know it has a yuri tag but can't you make it arya x harry?

ch 22 Chapter 21 - The boy who cares

Harry Potter and the Chosen One

Book&Literature · Legacy_24

Catatafish

2yr

Commented

You could release your story on other sites.

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Catatafish

3yr

Commented

multiple personality disorder? cool.

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Catatafish

3yr

Replied to Catatafish

i didn't know that this site censored certain words automatically - that's so stupid.

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Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Catatafish

3yr

Commented

why a pairing for the mc? she doesn't seem like the kind of person who whould comit to a relationship. *** sure, but love?

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Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Catatafish

3yr

Replied to Shitty_Author

Mmh, I guess that works too. I just pictured her causing chaos by estrangeíng harry from his parents (they kept twins from each other) and destroying the reputation of the potter (they gave a magical child of a purblood blodline to a muggle orphanage). Well I look forward to what you have planned. By the way why didn't sirius get her?

ch 0 8 Meeting Mother

Mad Gamer in Harry Potter (DROPPED. Sorry)

Movies · Shitty_Author

Catatafish

3yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. If she pretended that she is angry at the potters and that she wants nothing to do with them (especially if she isn't sorted in grifendor) then she could avoid the plot, live unmolested and be free do do what she wants, right? That seems like the best course of action. (she has money from the zombies after all)

ch 0 8 Meeting Mother

Mad Gamer in Harry Potter (DROPPED. Sorry)

Movies · Shitty_Author

Catatafish

3yr

Commented

Thanks for the story. Will she save harry from the dursleys? Wouldn't that be perfect for a neutral family - she could tell the dark side that they save a wizard from muggles and limit dumbeldores influence and the light side that they saved the boy-who-lived. And it would introduce an interesting relationship between mc and harry.

ch 0 8 Chapter eight

Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -

Book&Literature · Timis

Catatafish

3yr

Commented

The sexy jutsu part was funny - poor mc. But woundn't it make more sense that naruto would live with the mc in her house after he was thrown out of the orphanage?

ch 18 Chapter 18: New assignment

So the mc is a mix between his past live and hinata? That would usually lead to some kind of identity crisis for most people and I think it would be be an interesting aspect for this story, if you wanted to write about that.