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God_Is_With_Me
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ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
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Replied to Eaebeleza But that's the thing. This isn't reality, it's a book.
I can't see what's going on, I can't hear what's going on. I can only read. That's why I need to know how their death was like, what was going on in their mind and only person capable of doing that is the author because it's only him/her/etc that's knows how it was like in their head/imagination.
Let me give you an example, If you watched harry potter. Imagine when Draco killed Dumbledore we didn't see any expression from neither draco nor Dumbledore nor Snape nor Harry.
Imagine if it was just a cutscene and next thing Dumbledore is dead. It would have been sooo terrible 😂
ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
1yr
Replied to Eaebeleza This is a story.
Which story or film or anime have you seen where the MC or someone relating to the MC die without any reaction from anyone. They'd always have a dying thought especially in books because we can't see what's going on unlike in comics or movies.
So it's not whining, I would rather call it bad writing but who am I to judge🤷🏾♂️. I've personally lost interest in the fic
ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
1yr
Replied to Eaebeleza That's life, I agree
But this is a book, A fictional one not real life mate . That's the difference
ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
1yr
Replied to God_Is_With_Me I'm honestly just disappointed in author and myself for wasting time
ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
1yr
Commented Wow so you killed them off just like that. What a waste of good developed characters
Like why waste so much building for magik, Change John's personality and interfere with his fate just to kill them off like dogs on the side of the street.
You didn't even give them a chance to react or even a pov of their death and how they felt. They just simply died, You literally wasted me time with them.
Why let me get attached if you knew that they'll be killed like trash.
Why make them seem important when truthfully they are not at all.
Especially Magik, You built her up since chapter 1 and killed her off just like that
ch 34 Chapter 33 - Phoenix Awakening
Psionic (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · Moziel
Okay first of all. There's no plot. Author decided in his/her/they/whatever infinite wisdom to not put any description, prologue or anything. So if you're planning on reading it just know that you're going in dark. That's one of the reasons I gave it a one star In story development
Another reason is that,This fanfic seems to be based on Greek mythos with Hades possibly as the mc (The reason I say possibly is that Hades has the most pov's. But there's nothing else really defining him as an MC). So it's based on Greek mythos but it doesn't stray away too much from the original story that much or any iterations (other fanfics, etc) of it.
Overall, There's no defining feature of this novel to keep anyone going except for the writing style that's very clean actually.
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Replied to I_Wanta_Die 
She heard him say as he kissed her again, his hands hugging her curves and making her mind go numb.
In One Piece, as Hashirama Senju
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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Replied to Beau_Bauer_5526 
Aizen's words fit this situation like Cinderella's glass slipper.
Fairy Tail: Shinigami
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
1yr
Commented Excuse me author but what's the plot of this story 😅.
Truthfully I'm just here for the writing style, I don't really know what you're cooking.
I don't know if this is backstory or actual plot cause this is very familiar to me or anyone that has a half decent knowledge of Greek mythos.
Sure things have changed from the original story and it's many iterations but nothing too noteworthy
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Commented Welp you can't have everything
Main reason why I'm still going on is cause I love your plot your writing style, your fight scenes.
But the romance could use some work. Too fast, too unnecessary for now
ch 23 Chapter 23: Beloved Rose!
Naruto SI : LIGHTNING AND ROSES
Anime & Comics · Drkest
1yr
Commented So you're in Mikaboshi's, Knull, etc target list
.... Noice
"I know the truth puts a lot of pressure on you, Apollo, but you've got plenty of time, so don't let it get to you."
Marvel : Eternal Blazing Sun
Movies · Eren_fraser
2yr
Replied to God_Of_Yandere Maybe
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Replied to BigNerdNasty Actually this was meant to be chapter 1 but for some reason it's not doing so, even though it's reflecting from my side that it's Chapter 1
Please take this as an Auxiliary Chapter
ch 0 2 Important Announcement
The Heavens System Subsidiary (I Was Chosen By The Word)
Eastern · God_Is_With_Me
God_Is_With_Me
ch 70 CHAPTER 69
VECTOR IN DC
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme