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Is it supposed to be “not mageia nor mana”?
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Replied to dan990900
No, import is correct in this context.
"I don't know," Eldrian replied, not willing to go yet. Zamia was now explaining the ins and outs of Tier 3 magic to him. Her explanation was mostly on static Tier 3 magic, since the dynamic magic she knew was not something Eldrian could copy. Even so, Eldrian felt it was still of great import and did not wish to leave before he took in everything he could.
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Thanks for the chapters. Congratulations on getting the upgrade to a paid story! I assume that now means you actually make at least a minor amount of money off of your work - you can officially say you're a Professional Writer!
ch 84 Erik's second day, to the library
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Replied to La0o9
All Crossing Sea of Bitterness sounds like the name of a Sea. To me it Doesn’t invoke the idea of parting water. although I found the other name to be a little weird too, atleast it made a bit of a connection with parting water: “shall pass” to me sounded like a play on the word pass, for example how a mountain pass is a path through a mountain range. TL:DR I liked the original one better.
ch 817 Mystic-type Ability
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ch 257 Tournament prep (Part 1)
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