Cybermonkey

10mth

Replied to J_S_2998

such an attention seeking clown smd

ch 22 Francis’s Visit

Cybermonkey

10mth

Commented

jiang is one of the 5 template mc surnames besides lin, ye, su and xiao as we all know but ting? sounds like passerby A in his own story!

"Thank you, grandfather!" Jiang Ting exclaimed, proceeding to eat his dinner.

Divine Will and Sword of the Heavens

Eastern · Infinity_09

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

how dumb do u have to be

'Do they have to evaluate our aptitudes too?'

My Master Is Super Powerful But Overly Steady

Eastern · Cloud Ocean Flowing Gold

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

wearing such sloppy clothes to a banquet hes aware of is just asking to be pointed out and humiliated befitting of an attentionseeking and pretentious mc who cant get over his own ego i wish someone would write about a mature and unpretentious mc for once

Besides, these young people are prideful and if they see a person wearing such shabby looking clothing like he does, there is a high chance they would think he was some kind of servant who is there to assist them.

Celestial Peak

Eastern · Simple_Dynasty

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

not role model but idol i assume? im not sure what ur going for either since u specifically mention the "maids" here, it seems more reasonable to go with "idol"

Wang Yue at some point admired Wang Ling's attitude and seriousness. How he never do anything half-hearted was something admirable. He was hard-working, kind, serious, and even handsome. In all seriousness, Wang Ling was becoming a role model for others.

Celestial Peak

Eastern · Simple_Dynasty

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

thats contradictory, cant really be true if shes a maid for a fool at the end of the day, pls

This young girl who happened to be Wang Ling's current little maid was her little sister. Although she was only adopted by the Wang family, Wang Yue was treated as an actual child of the family.

Celestial Peak

Eastern · Simple_Dynasty

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

makes for a good villain template tbh

"Curse you, Wang Ling, everything that I have worked for will be destroyed because of your selfishness!! Many will die because of you!!"

Celestial Peak

Eastern · Simple_Dynasty

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

too exaggerated

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Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

Cybermonkey

1yr

Replied to Tsetth

yeah i appreciate writers like u who try smth of their own tbh even tho my comments so far were rather crude u still responded politely to each of them, respect just cause of the great attitude ill continue to read and try to give constructive comments instead keep up the great work bud!

ch 0 1 Prologue: Destruction And Rebirth, The Beginning Of A New Era And Generation

Immortal Journey Of The Wu Clan's Twin Dragons

Eastern · TSETTH

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

even his death was so pathetic, now i feel sorry for him for real #when ur only joy in life kills u

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The Villain's Story

Fantasy · Blazuku

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

the 1st chapter feels like a major info dump, suggest taking it slow and letting things unfold as the story progresses

ch 0 1 Prologue: Destruction And Rebirth, The Beginning Of A New Era And Generation

Immortal Journey Of The Wu Clan's Twin Dragons

Eastern · TSETTH

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

i hope we can get the nonsense over with quick, finding the obvious incoming faceslapping plotlines pretty boring already

‘Don’t test my patience little brother.’

The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?

Eastern · TSETTH

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

its not bad but there is way too much redundant rambling on...did i just read 2 chapters just for him to make it to the talent test? felt like 3 even couldve sped things up tbh by skipping the posturing and ramblings

ch 0 8 Chapter 6- Think Things Through... Can't Be Left Alive!!

The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?

Eastern · TSETTH

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

well he basically transferred his talent to the crown prince is my assumption so far he is probably too lazy to succeed the throne or deal with his brother

ch 0 2 Prologue(2)

The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?

Eastern · TSETTH

Cybermonkey

1yr

Posted

i was considering giving this a solid chance and it was pretty alright until we get to the 3rd/4th chapter where the mc is thinking about fucking his adoptive mom and right after we find out that the mom in fact also wants to fuck him... this is way too heavy for my taste, so its a pass

Myth Beyond Heaven

Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

thats 3 entire paragraphs describing the sect master id have said its the fml but shes supposed to be his adoptive mom so...a bit weird

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Myth Beyond Heaven

Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

how come im only seeing this book with over 1k chapters now? weird also, gives me harem vibes despite the authors wishy-washy answer as to whether its a harem or not i mean sect building with all girls sect? can only go down the harem path imo

ch 0 2 A Man From Earth

Myth Beyond Heaven

Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

like an elementary school student, mightve aswell tricked him into the mines with a lolipop [img=faceslap]

Eventually, Jiang Beiran survived. He also knew that he had been cheated, and recognized the fact that he had been tricked into an illegal mine by some biscuits.

I Just Won't Play By The Book

Eastern · 7 Percent

Cybermonkey

1yr

Replied to DaoistH

severely underappreciated comment

ch 0 1 Immortal Fate

Eternal Sacred King

Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber

Cybermonkey

1yr

Commented

imagine waking up to a stranger hovering over u in ur room while u were sleeping creepy af...but very romantic in the authors mind

Ye Jiushang sat by the bed and looked at the little girl sleeping soundly. The more he looked at her, the cuter he thought she was. He couldn't help but reach out and gently stroke her face.

The Physicist Wife Who Overturned The World

Fantasy · Lu Yi

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