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The skull knew it would not be easy to get through that door. It took a closer look and saw a bookshelf beside it with a yellowish book. Printed on it were two words in bold—Ranga Sutra.

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

MyriadDestiny

8mth

Commented

仙器 - immortal tool/implement/artefact

'Could it be a Spiritual Machine?

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

MyriadDestiny

8mth

Commented

逐月式 - *chasing* moon style

"Imperial Flying Sword, Moon Style!"

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

MyriadDestiny

8mth

Commented

炼气 - qi refining;筑基 - foundation building;金丹 - golden core;元婴 - nascent soul;出窍 - leave aperture (literal);分神 - divide spirit (literal);合体 - unite body (or just Fusion or Unity);渡劫 - crossing tribulation;大乘 - Mahayana (literally Great Vehicle; from Sanskrit)

From the lowest to highest, the different realms of cultivation were Qi Refining, Foundation Building, Golden Core, Yuan Ying, Out of Aperture, Distraction, Combination, Cross Tribulation, and Mahayana.

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

magus is singular, needs plural <magi> in this sentence. Verb-object agreement compare "I wonder if there are [magician]/[magicians] here?"

"I wonder if there are magus here?" He said but didn't really think about it.

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

the writing's pretty janky

ch 0 1 Return

Returning From The Magic World

Urban · Dark_Crow1111

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Replied to Palea

... that's what the transation's for dumbass

Being Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse Mages

Fantasy · Forest Of Elves

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

bootleg Cultivation Bigshot

ch 0 1 Shocking the Empress at the Start

Fantasy: I Turn Out To Be A Master

Eastern · The North Wolf

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

qipao Author has clearly never learned or researched Chinese before

She wore a traditional red flowered Qipa.

I Quit Being The Villain

Urban · Kurupts

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

FYI 4 to author: the Ra part of Ara (A Ra) is not a valid syllable in Chinese

With these thoughts said in her head, Shu Ling grabbed her phone and called her mother Shu Ara.

I Quit Being The Villain

Urban · Kurupts

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

FYI 3 to author: this is not a valid syllable in Chinese

"Xo Quin!?"

I Quit Being The Villain

Urban · Kurupts

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

tense issues previous and following paragraphs are in past tense, this parapgraph is in present tense

Her skin is the color of snow, she wore a tight green one piece dress which showed off her curvy body, giving her the bearing of a noble woman.

I Quit Being The Villain

Urban · Kurupts

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

FYI 2 to author: Xo is not a valid syllable in pinyin/Mandarin Chinese j, q, x can only occur before /i/ or /y/ (written as ⟨ü⟩, but the dots can be omitted if following <j q x>)

"Xo Shi... How long have you been working here?"

I Quit Being The Villain

Urban · Kurupts

MyriadDestiny

1yr

Commented

FYI to author: Yen is not a valid syllable in pinyin (Chinese)

[I know, the stupid protagonists' little sister, Lin Yen who is a heroine will accidently hit my rear, which then I'll be forced to ask for compensation.]