Ronvoli - Profile

~Disclaimers~ • English is not my first language. • Long. Skip to the parts that matter for you • Spoilers are at the end and still very vauge, so i did not check the spoiler box (Please tell me if i need to change it) • I did not finish this novel! I dropped it with around 30 chapters left. ~Writing~ Mostly it's fine, some mistakes here and there, but understandable. My Problem is the fight scenes. They are too long. Fight scenes are supposed to be written as quick as possible. This does not happen here. Even the fights that last for a few seconds, are around 4 long paragraphs. Don't get me started on the metaphores, for example something like this <He looked like a skyrocketing flying eagle and a mad dragon dragon at the same time!> Also the author likes to use Optimus Prime as a comparison. ~Story Development~ Starts very good. Even got me to cry. The romance has a bad start, but gets better, sadly gets worse again. And then it starts to get bad. It's slow and still has some good moments, but it makes story decisions that i hate. Some of these decisions are at the very end ~Character Design~ Can't remember a single character, besides the fact that some are europian. ~World Background~ I think it is good? Can't really say, to be honest. It seems pretty consistent to me. It does an okay job at using the sci-fi element. What bothers me is the fact, that it says continents are no longer seperated, but they are clearly differences. ~Why I dropped~ I dropped because i was getting frustrated. I had started forcing myself to continue with around 200/300 chapters left. Didn't want to feel like I wasted my time reading so far. But then I cried, because i was so done. Maybe i can get myself to finish those 30 chapters in the future. But for now I am done. ~Should you read it~ It is honestly hard to say. But since I had tons of fun in the beginning: Yeah try it! Don't expect a masterpiece and skip parts, if necessary. But please don't force yourself, it isn't worth it. Thanks for Reading. Below are a few story decisions I hate. [Spoiler] • Mentions character, but doesn't show him, so much it gets annoying. • Kills of a character, 100% dead, Mc had his corpse in his arms. 200+ chapters later, turns out character is still alive. • Cripples character, comes back but stronger • Male character gets raped, gets ignored that it happend. • Kills of important Character, for around 10 chapter. • Female character gets raped, shows of her body in front of a ton of people, other character decides that she is "his" woman