Nagi_alt - Profile

Took me some time to read through the 24 chapters published of the novel, but after giving it a read I can say that it got potential. The starting felt rather rushed or to say the least made it hard for me to imagine the scenes properly to get fully engaged in it. I would personally blame that due to the lack of imagery. But despite this, I can see great potential, as you read further and further into it, you can see the writing quality improving and the hook gets better. I'd imagine the rating I gave to be all the more earnest if I was to rate it by chapter 100. Great work so far!

The way that the author incorporates western writing styles in his fantasy universe is truly refreshing on a platform such as WebNovel. The immense potential that it brings to the platform and the very plot it surrounds in itself makes me as a reader lust for more to read. This not getting up there in views would be unfortunate, as a treasure such as this truly should be shared and known among the masses. Great job author, I hope to see your continued growth as a writer.

For WebNovel's novel quality this is definitely a 5/5 and over. Really love the story, progression and pace. If there were more chapters I would spend days to binge read it.

The way that the author incorporates western writing styles on his fantasy universe is truly refreshing on a platform such as WebNovel. The immense potential that it brings to the platform and the very plot it surrounds in itself makes me as a reader lust for more to read. This not getting up there in views would be unfortunate, as a treasure such as this truly should be shared and known among the masses. Great job author, I hope to see your continued growth as a writer.