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Aaron_McLeod_1690

Aaron_McLeod_1690

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Aaron_McLeod_1690
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phase = step or processphrase = sentence or expression
Aaron_McLeod_1690
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it's called a parkade.

Instead of an empty parking lot, a new building appeared on top of the flatland. It was a parking lot building.

Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

Fantasy · DamnPlotArmor

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oh sweet merciful lords, Anthony... take pictures when they wake up

[Well, the fighting is going okay without me, Solant is doing well with her training and you three are doing great getting levels… so I'm getting a bit bored. And I have to say,] he chuckled, [that this, is going to be HILARIOUS.]

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

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true, but block a strike with a staff or spear versus blocking with a dagger or shortsword. different weapons have different difficulties in using. and a short blade requires significantly more skill to utilize correctly

Daggers, daggers are good, because they can be dipped in poison and can deal fatal blows from cover, but let's be realistic, I'm no assassin, and a dagger needs a lot of experience, like a lot, and it's one of the most difficult weapons to master. Simply put, because it has so many disadvantages in a fight to properly use one effectively one must be god tier in dagger mastery.

Poison God's Heritage

Poison God's Heritage

Eastern · Biako

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Monty Python and the holy grail's priest says this. it's blatant plagiarism/a call out to the work. and knowing those writers, they appreciate pretty much every shout out to their work, especially the holy hand grenade

"O Lord, bless this thy hand grenade, that with it thou mayst blow thine enemies to tiny bits, in thy mercy." Chants Jenny as the orb glows brighter in between her hands as she brings them to her face to pray. Mumbling under her breath the pulling of a pin is heard before the small girl counts to three, not two nor one and most definitely not four. Upon hitting the number three Jenny lobs the orb above her head towards the approaching form of Spooky and dives towards the boss, barely going under its jaws but receiving several spikes in her back from the elongated spikes on his tail.

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Fantasy · Bietarnu

Aaron_McLeod_1690
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you're* the support. your - possessive, as in ownership. you're - contraction of you are

'Your job isn't done yet Slax! The only way you'll get stronger is to fight and win so in this case your the support! You got this man!' I shout at him as he nods and wipes the sweat of his brow while making his way behind the pack and facing the entrance as the first creature pokes it's head into the room.

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

Fantasy · Bietarnu

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kept tabs* on them. taps - an opening from which a liquid pours tabs - a form of marking, usually sticky notes, used to keep track of information. in this slang, keeping tabs on a person means keeping attention on them.

One thing seemed clear, the orc kingdom knew about them and even kept taps on them. It seemed like it was time for Minas Mar to make a final move. After all, they wouldn't want to be stuck between both forces.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

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hodge-podge, not hotpotch.

Most of them had a military background and a tragic past, but what else they managed to remember of their lives seemed like normal relatable experiences. Although there was a setting-in period, with Minas Mar already being a hotpotch of people, it didn't take long for them to find their place.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Aaron_McLeod_1690
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it is physically impossible to have blonde hair with this genealogy. the dominant strain from either the black or Asian heritage (brown/black) would be prevalent, not blonde. nice try though, author.

Due to this, Randy was quarter Asian, quarter Black, and half White. As a result of that, Randy had a light skin complexion with his blonde hair in a curly form. His eyes were grey in color, unlike his sister who had blue eyes from his mother. Randy seemed like the only one with grey eye color in their family.

Blood Assimilation

Blood Assimilation

Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven

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🤣 that was an amazing simile

Once Lex returned to his apartment, he investigated the ring given to him by John, but when he saw the size of the massive book that appeared in his mind, he quietly and respectfully put it away. That was not to say that he had given up on the book, but that currently he had his hands full with learning his techniques and didn't have the mental energy to read what looked like a physical representation of Wikipedia.

The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

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...didn't sell* an herb...

"No they didn't sold a herbs but a weapon which broke while fighting."

I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

Urban · Heavenly_Daoist_06

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errand to run. making errands would mean creating an errand for someone. running them means to complete them.
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Only I Am A Reader

Only I Am A Reader

Fantasy · LightningAsura

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moping not mopping. mope (ending with a single consonent and and e as the suffix) means the active tense only receives one consonant (moping). mop, no e suffix, gets the double consonant for the active tense (mopping). she is mopping the floor.
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The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

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warriors have* come. plural conjugation

"Ohohoho, I see a bunch of strong and brave warriors has come to offer themselves as a blood sacrifice!" they heard a cackling voice.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Aaron_McLeod_1690
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hunters (in the dark) who, for clarification

They could see the aura of vitality any living thing gave off. The darkness could do nothing to blind the golems. Like most hunters in the dark used ambushes, they had become easy prey after they were unable to hide.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Aaron_McLeod_1690
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like most hunters who*

They could see the aura of vitality any living thing gave off. The darkness could do nothing to blind the golems. Like most hunters in the dark used ambushes, they had become easy prey after they were unable to hide.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

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