Luckvv

13d

Commented

"Fine. Elysia, Valeron, this is how I met your mother…"

Luckvv

1mth

Commented

just realized, english will probably be the language of tiamats and Bahamuts like dragons with dragon tongue, lith is way too lazy to make a language himself and it would give an explanation to his use of english!!

"I think not!" Lith and Solus replied in unison, making the three of them burst into a laughter at the inside joke from his memories.

Luckvv

5mth

Posted

im on ch. 832 and this author is lacking in just about every story telling skill there is, character/race descriptions? forget about it. Properly describing a setting or painting a picture with their words? I'm almost certain they don't even know how to describe what tree looks like. you want character development from the MC or side characters? you won't find that here so good luck. looking for an interesting plot lines or even mediocre ones? you're better off licking a rock because that would be more mentally stimulating and honestly I could go on but I don't want to waste your time the way this novel wasted mine. this last one is for the translator.... you're bad at your job, you're inconsistent with translating the same word multiple times and I'm certain you lied on your resume, kindly find a new profession.

Abe the Wizard

Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds

Luckvv

5mth

Replied to Tenzai

I'm on chapt 832 and I've got some notes, first off the character descriptions are trash to non existent for almost every character/race that's introduced, you want character development in a story? forget about it with this one, you want any interesting plot lines or interactions with the MC? you're better off licking a rock bc that would be more mentally stimulating, this author doesn't know how to describe a setting to save their life, this last note is for the translator.... you're bad at your job and you need to find a new profession...

Abe the Wizard

Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds

Luckvv

8mth

Commented

second

'Fuck me sideways, either we do spend too much time together or I'm developing ESP. My money is on the former. I need to start working on countermeasures.'

Luckvv

9mth

Commented

mid sentence cliff = ded morok

"Fair, this one question deserves an answer." The Tyrant nodded. "You can either take everything out before she leaves-"

Luckvv

9mth

Commented

do you think lith and solus could forcefully use monsters minds to ease the burden of the eyes?

ch 2539 No I in Funeral (Part 1)

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

POV: (you're still excited about the 2 new tower floors that were formed but never talked about like 23 chapters ago

The Master felt guilty for the lives he had taken and those he was already planning to take in order to further his plans. The new Madness couldn't be fueled by rainbows and happy thoughts. It needed live sacrifices and hundreds of them.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

In the past, a person close to him betrayed him in the cruelest way. As revenge, when Bai Zemin recovered from his depression, he secretly sneaked into that person's bedroom and broke his legs as well as his arms with a metal pipe during the night.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

then technically none of this should work if mana doest work on cells... every living creature is made of cells so therefore the mana should just ignore them right? what the author implies here is mana is not effective on a micro scale, if that's the case then we shouldn't be seeing evolutions everywhere we should just see every living thing explode bc cells can't handle mana or at the very least it affects no living organism and magic only goes to affect inanimate objects, saying germs and viruses can't handle mana is saying anything of that size can't (guess what people are made of, things of that size!!!)

Bai Zemin unconsciously let out a sigh of relief. If the case was as he had assumed, then he would have no choice but to find his family quickly and help them evolve so that their bodies would become more resilient.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

I think its far more than double... he's a shape shifting beast abomination hybrid that can take the shape, size and texture of any bad dragon (ifykyk) he can use magic in basically limitless ways (again ifykyk) like the pure unadulterated fantasies that could be fulfilled

"What? There's just the two of us here." She shrugged while kissing him on the face-mask. "I'm a very lucky woman. I married one man and got two husbands and double the fun."

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

ch 0 1 A New Beginning

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Luckvv

1yr

Commented

Go our Guardian of Destruction share your void with all of Mogar!

The Horseman was right. She had never witnessed a tribulation like that because the final trial before a Guardian was born was a rare event and it followed its own rules.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Luckvv

2yr

Commented

wasn't it stated earlier on that menadion didn't place here there and that she kept tower warping to all the geysers she new trying to find someone who could help her before eventually running out of energy near lutia and started cannibalizing the tower to stay alive until found by lith, that's a big ol plot hole there

"I know, but Lutia is my home. My Mo-, I mean Menadion left me here for a reason and I intend to honor it." Solus had corrected herself to not hurt Elina's feelings. After what Orpal had done, she had yet to recover from her personal trauma as well.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Luckvv

2yr

Commented

mogar literally couldn't deal with Manohars ego after his death and spit him back out XD!

Lith laughed about it and so did everyone present, yet the fact that Dhiral Manohar Marth giggled every time he heard his second name and obeyed his mother, creeped them out more than Thrud.