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screenshot the picture of this fanfic and use google translate to copy the Chinese character, paste at Google and put 69shu on it

I remmember the webnovel posted a guide for writing stories or novels, it's very good.

- creating main outline for your story, MC's purpose for example let's say MC want to find a way back home to earth because he misses his lovely daughter or wife or whatever else, the Shinobi world and the original outline is just the background. - slowly add more outline in your story as minor points in the story, which later on will give more colours to the story. - explore more than just Konoha - this is ofc fanfic so you are free to put more elements into this, such as bringing inspiration from other stories into your story, but ofc make it inline with the story's concept - creative ideas? hmm you need to explore this urself. this shows how creative you are

no plot to the story no original ideas you can do better

very recommended, I have read the raw and it seems that the raw stop at chapter 237th, last updated 2nd May 2023. unless the translator wanted to try writing the continuation of the story. then reading this no ending fanfic will be waste of time.. anyway the overall ideas is very good, such as MC create alternative version of multiple infants shadow clone of himself and sealing the clone in pokeball with mechanism of slowly leaking the chakra, to lessen the side effect of shadow clone. using shadow clone to only clone parts of body such as hands ears eyes by connecting the chakra meridians to user's chakra meridians accupoint to mimick the ability of flower flower fruit of Nico robin One piece, creating game arcade that steal chakra as payment of playing arcade for user to analyze, soft fist combined with his alternative soap water ninjutsu for slippery effect, soap bubble sound insulation effect and affects targets vision and eyes.