Carmen_Quiles - Profile

Overall a very good read. The pacing is consistent, with excellent character development and thoughtful world building. The inclusion of multiple p.o.v.s is a nice touch.

Well written. A little wordy at times, but overall a good read. I rarely find a story that can hold my attention for an extended amount of time without me having to put it down for a while.

thnx for the likes

letting us see the character develop and grow stronger is actually pretty good I like the fact that he's growing and exploring all of his possibilities I guess

a new twist on an old trope. at least the the mc doesn't start off being over powered. seems like he's going to be a unifying character or a rallying point for the rest... we'll see

right from the start your pulled into the story. the mc is interesting and the mystery of why comes into play. the background is rich and the secondary characters pretty good too. only downside is some of the descriptions are a bit confusing and the grammar needs some work

very good story and considering the plot points moving along rather well I like it. the MC is thoughtful and is it overpowered overall it's a really good story

the story is enjoyable... the mc is thoughtful without being boring. my only complaint is that the pacing is a little slow, but all in all i trust the author to know what they're doing.

I'm enjoying the story so far. The fact that the mc isn't op from the beginning is awesome. All in all good story line and I'm looking forward to reading more.