heidicassius

3yr

Commented

it would be better if the author can develop lady Chen's character more becoz she doesn't look like a kind mom but more like an authoritative one who doesn't really care much bout her daughter's opinions but her own

ch 0 5 Only she knew that going shopping with Lady Chen was tiring.

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

when you expect your daughter to be happy about marrying a stranger she has never heard of.....

As if suddenly remembering something, Lady Chen said, "Am going to teach that brat a lesson, imagine she has a date today and she's not even touched, maybe she's even sleeping".

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

this is wrong on so many levels

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heidicassius

3yr

Replied to Destiny_Aitsuji

(≧▽≦) of course i will!!

heidicassius

3yr

Posted

Tbh this work has pretty much everything that the original manga lacked in comparison. What i love the most is how the author improved and polished the main characters and made them much more likeable i guess. Kudos to the author for this awesome work, i really love this one.

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

idk why but I cried

Asami froze. The angelic expression on his mate made his heart ache. For the very first time in his life, Asami was thankful that he was alive. He kissed his mate back, pouring his emotions into it.

heidicassius

3yr

Posted

***spoiler alert*** I'm honestly reading this for the smut cuz it's hot af( I'm not that gud at remembering character names especially in comics so pls tolerate it if u find my mentioning their hair color which is obviously the only way to identify them without their names annoying). the black haired guy is weird af and a jerk to the white hair guy like "Oh you're freezing you'll get a cold!" and the next moment he's like "Suck my dick hoe!" Honestly the brown haired guy seems to care better bout white hair guy but you'll only be seeing his face in a few chaps randomly and most of the time it's just the black hair guy banging the white hair guy and being a jerk to him but at the same time the author tries to make it seem as tho he cares for him which is dumb. at best they be nothing but friends with benefits. i don't think there's any need of actual romance between these two becoz their relationship doesn't start off that well it's just the white hair trying to forget bout his first lover by getting ****ed by the black hair guy.

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

he should've yeeted away from there already

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heidicassius

3yr

Commented

she just got roasted fr

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heidicassius

3yr

Commented

ok now you're just asking for it...

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heidicassius

3yr

Commented

just how many brothers do u have exactly? three or four? and what about the sisters?

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heidicassius

3yr

Commented

Dennis reminds me of Carlisle

I have been with Maddie for a year, she is the first girl I have been able to tolerate. I have been waiting a thousand years to find my supposed soul mate. I remember the first time Denis told me about finding my soulmate. Dennis is my father; he is the one that turned me. I remember like it was yesterday. The late 1900's. I was in a hospital ward just a 17-year-old boy dying of cholera. He was a doctor and he saved my life.

The Werewolf's Vampire Mate

LGBT+ · WagS

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

gosh this is like cats vs dogs no particular reason at all, just born enemies

I sigh loudly "Put on your fucking clothes. I will be back" I open the door to my room and walk out the hallway. I go to the far end and to the room of my best friend Rex. Rex has lived with me all my life, growing up his parents were killed during the last Contention. The Contention was the war we had ten years ago with the Vamps. Yes, you heard right. Fucking vampires. They have been our enemies since we were known to exist. Werewolves and vampires are opposites. Hate each other.

The Werewolf's Vampire Mate

LGBT+ · WagS

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

i think the first sentence needs a little correction. u can remove the 'older sister' part and just mention it as sister since u are gonna say that she's a year older to her.

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The Crown's Obsession

Fantasy · ash_knight17

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

I'm sorry but that sounds so wrong 😂😂😂

"My baby boy who I had held in my arms all this time is going to be held by another person. I am so sad!!!!" said his father while laughing, that Xiang had to hit his father on his head so that he would shut up.

DROPped

LGBT+ · animecage

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

does her ''excellence" in bed matter that much in order to be an "ideal wife"? and why call her a hoe when if it was a male lead you would call him a player? talk about double standards...

Tang Muxin was the only child of Tang Ruisi, the chairman of Tang Medical Enterprises. Not only was she multi-talented, knowledgeable, and well read, she was also fair and beautiful; her looks were comparable to the prettiest of flowers, as if all the goodness in the world had been placed into her. Moreover, she was also a very talented cook. She was simply the ideal type of wife, someone who could make delicious meals, would have a presence in public, and was also excellent in bed. As such, she was the dream girl of numerous guys in school.

Rebirth of the Godly Prodigal

Urban · Chen Ji Tang Hong Dou

heidicassius

3yr

Commented

you can't be stupid enough to mention what the substance is especially when it's obvious you put it in there.

"There are only three of us here. If you aren't framing me, then are you claiming that Master Mu was the one to spike his own drink with a date rape drug?"