Webnovel Author: ChaosSorted - Novel Collection

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jihi?! what happened ?

So I read 7 chapters of this novel and this is my review: Starting with the WRITING QUALITY looks like this is the author's first work so I shouldn't expect something excellent. The writing quality is GOOD, some words look mtl but they do keep up with their expectancy. So overall, the author can improve! Now the STABILITY OF UPDATES, I don't know when the author first published this novel but there isn't a problem with his stability and there's not much to say about it. Only hope that he can increase the daily chapters for his readers. Continuing with STORY DEVELOPMENT, the first chapter sorts of confuses you and doesn't flow well because of all the unexplained terms but can be understood that author is trying to keep a mystery element to it. The latter half of the chapters are a clique, describing the protagonist's experience in the "Apocalypse Zone". The story seems like inspiration and amalgamation of several works the author adored and is trying to make his own by using all of the elements from them. The system "Fate Devourer" is and has the same features as the LOOT innate ability from the novel "The Earth's Alpha Prime". I don't know if the author was inspired by it or he just coincidentally made it similar. The novel has a bit of edginess by sort of giving the protagonist too many powers rather than a single but it seems to be the likings of the author. And next is CHARACTER DESIGN, the protagonist is depicted well and is the clique who becomes 'cold and dangerous'. The other characters aren't talked about briefly but do get explained a little. Overall, the protagonist is the same clique type following and growing his cultivation to read the realms of gods while also building up his harem. The last is WORLD BACKGROUND, the author didn't explain the world background much clearly and made it an element of confusion which makes readers wonder what's happening. The world background should be improved and should be explained to make the readers imagine the world as they run through the novel. Make the world background an element of excitement rather than confusion. THAT'S ALL FOLKS! This is my truthful review of the novel without any grudge or favouritsm. I do hope that the author improves and makes this amazing novel more amazing! keep up!

So Read all the 10 chapters. The writing quality is top-notch, I think there will be a stability of updates once this gets mainstream, the story development is the best thing with character design being the second. The world background even though not that detailed or explained gives you some hints and is not totally blind, I think the author will explain more in the further chapters. Other than that, I love the novel very much. Getting some Noblesse + My Vampire System vibess! Keep up, author! I am gonna be one of your first fans :)!