Daotist_Zen

Dad sat down at the table, opened a bottle of baijiu, which label had been so soiled that the words could not be read, grabbed some green vegetables with his chopsticks, then finished the glass of baijiu in one gulp. There was no meat on the table. Dad liked to chop bones and stew meat, but never let anyone eat it or go near his iron pot. He was still wearing his plastic apron splattered with blood, and a few flies swirled around him.

Since The Red Moon Appeared

Sci-fi · Ghost of Dark Mountain

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

Referencing the anime and manga kind of breaks the immersion of the novel.

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RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

Just cut off their legs

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RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

Why does this overlap with agility

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RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Replied to Laron_Shawn

He also immortal even without the dengeon because of his title so I don't know why he is freaking out.

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RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

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RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

It would have been funny if author had used the infinity war reference with him killing other zombie like two zombie standing together at edge of the cliff and MC say "sorry little one" and throws the other zombie.

ch 0 3 Level Up

RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

So he was supposed to get system before he died or was it just system being slow.

ch 0 1 A Wrong Turn

RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

Kind of make sense in context of the story/plot to get physical improvement genes but the genes he got are too trash like the finger improvement, its not totally useless but it's literally can be replaced by an guns as they do much better job than an half assed ability but it does make sense as MC probably won't able to get his hand on a gun but he won't knows unless he tries right, buying one for protection is not wrong for an student who has an accident before. The leg ability has its merit for both casual and life saving moments but its just for one leg which makes it not worth it. Also I can't describe MC luck as I don't know if it's ridiculously good ridiculously bad because there should be many negative effect gene out there but there should also some good one so I can't tell without seeing other characters gene to tell if MC got an good deal.

ch 18 Chapter 18 Beans Ejection Magical Power

A brand new era of gene mutations

Sci-fi · DaoistK47qjI

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

This is the most logical decision but I wanted see psyonic abilities . Leg ability are too lame.

ch 14 Chapter 14 Self-Activating Ability

A brand new era of gene mutations

Sci-fi · DaoistK47qjI

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Replied to Werebare

We call that plot armor

However, luck also played a part in this.

Lord of Enigma

Fantasy · Truly Foolish Elder

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

Why not mention this when he was planning to run away.

According to Old Morgan's diary, once the people from his family went near Holy Thorns High School, their powers would weaken rapidly, to the point of being even weaker than an ordinary person.

Lord of Enigma

Fantasy · Truly Foolish Elder

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

So initial impression is okay, grammar is good. Not the best start as comedy is not my cup of tea but okay, transmigration explanation was unnecessary in my opinion as having some mystery around it would keep the readers guessing while coming up with their own explanations. Same goes for the destruction of the universe where the universe doesn't even feels like an universe (I know) because it's too small, probably like size of an solar system (which is still quite big) but an solar system is just an tiny insignificant part of the universe that we live in so it's like an ant trying to destroy the earth it doesn't make sense even for most fantasy gods their powers at most can destroy planets which the "the world". It would have made sense to use dimension or realm rather that universe as it is more believable. This just some suggestions as it's author's novel he gets to decide what the universe is.

ch 0 1 The Room

Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

Fantasy · Darksky_ll

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Replied to LastWolf

Multiverse is unimaginably big like take dnd for example the are uncountable amount of world in Multiverse so it doesn't make sense to one up this also if this was an fan fic then it would have made sense to have an omniverse. Also very few stories can reach the Multiverse without being trash power fantasy.

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Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

Fantasy · Darksky_ll

Daotist_Zen

1yr

Commented

So does the parasite like like her or the previous host just liked her and that is explained here.

While eating his breakfast, Alexis suddenly sat next to him and pushed him slightly. She was quite the tomboy but Matt found that more attractive. She was the third highest ranking security officer on the ship, so her physique and stamina were a step above most. Although this was a colonizing and exploration ship, the military owned over ninety percent of the assets on board. Therefore, half the crew were military personnel.