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heads up there are spoilersanywho I have a couple complaints I just need to rent out the writer of this program all that stuff sorry I guess I guess you can use that information or experience but it still bugs me anywho like get back on the review honestly speaking they're not much to complain about other than the nursery on the system and the general romance or the payment ship everything about it and you let me explain about it I turned on reduces system I want to see Colby if you put at the beginning or have a very reasonable to make it thing that do do instead of it other than that I say it okay honestly don't like a mess of their nerve in my opinion well soon enough program consider it straight hey it could be a very implied line I meant at all well dragon would do do when we still limits of being strong here about it I meant ime it's a bit more stronger girl or maybe go to Warframe conquering everything around one tire world he might my opinion nothing bounce something that you already planned to set up a pretty done in my opinion yesterday or make a good reason why he using why mentally you don't want to use it because of somebody somebody something what I think some being at the same time you're speaking yeah that one is a weird one and you let go to the second thing DM like a romance I'm not single like XXX stuff you know go someone you love sing they are that's a general friend that's hanging out with is a bit sad despite right now in nature bring 200 for being alone to help myself but surely there are good points about it I haven't reminded me at Lisa opinion that you to be entertaining that those two things I generally don't think I that's about it well I hope you at least attempt to listen to it I bet 10 bucks you can't even understand most of this stuff and you I rate this size a perfect even or 3.0 and when I will terms you better stop being remind my phone reminds is then we do the sit in my area you great and don't burning yourself always stupid stuff like that if you really don't have anything to think make than I would have the same genre about it I meant like yours when I copy and miss about it or something like it it is just my opinion and since I'm not on CA right or anything like that I don't know how the process work all that stuff so it just opinion
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PS I only meant to get the chapter 9 before I mail it totally throw it on the back burner pretty muchanywho let's get back to the complaint part during chapter 9 when the main character figure out or saw or even when I honestly don't care care realized about injured now during the same heart and sing it just before they come in and they were talking about Boosie part and I stinky married to have the healing if you mix in with it why not he used to healing part similar same thing with the whole check out your belly now show your ability to the guy yes but it won't be impossible to use as a wake up you need besides all of that why not show your family and you order and I don't get it wrong when she yeah but when you want nothing to do the testing and special after showing him for him as a quote and quote farmer want to see the show him and his ability and you back to the story seriously what type of healing belly don't use that towards their family especially when they don't know and besides that why go out for a healing pot a little healing potion mind you never mind and Johnny might free or to begin with so how in the world he's going to explain how in the world and he got the potion with most likely a pretty expensive early not ask or to normal people in conclusion the main character they're pretty stupid ability that he has like it doesn't make any emotions we had to help or act like we you don't have that idea you just stupid am I so one more thing about the test what type of idiot only being very proudful and one skin only see a farmer I meant don't worry kids this week I will at least check check twice or even three times not just once and nearly assume he have a farmer telling that's it stupid my opinion that was mine and one reason I guess okay tomorrow there's mind you it on tonight bye
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(okay I put this on private pretty much because at the end I most likely will save them on the story but don't worry just along you the weed after the Gap you should be okay) anywho the man c is acting like a stupid more eviler child that's all I have to say anywho pretty much one about to say is going to be a spoiler so heads up just in case he's eating CD PS thing anywho pretty much the MC despite being reincarnate and a teenager who should have at least some common sense man you acting more like a kid than anything else who pretty much knows about the few should happen in the future I'm at recording out loud I read to all the way to chapter 55 I literally couldn't any for into simply stupid if you want me to run some more that's lucky ones on top specifically the one had the low start ones just a heads up and don't worry I'm sorry they were stayed there forever anywho here come the spoiler bring my laundry and a child is so and I mean it so had it I'm not black guy is in he don't know what to love I mean black has been as in he don't know how to learn from my own mistakes easily like racing here on classmate quote and quote by the way way with mind you Trinidad slim and to begin with like the MC says and get plenty of all right by going up the whole schools any robots your friends come over talk to him and he know I didn't promise attitude dark cover episodes he dancing when he thinks he's still going out of hero even though he's punished by staying inside of his room so as a result he got kicked out and so he take out a drive with has up by the way there's our prima dummy Troy that much better than the court that I mean have gluttons pretty much you know that Google ghost one for everyone call it and you wash source the eclipse of it I guess you probably know what I meant better turn training and will prove I still prove how we some training hero is him too friend go right batteries oh thank you his anger stay pretty much I'll take it all away oh and heads up he friends are the invisible girl and the one with the light okay okay bye
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