Darrell_Jordan

7mth

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I really hope this isn't dropped

ch 19 Meeting the Family's Part 2

Darrell_Jordan

11mth

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I'm sorry wrong story

His hulking muscles tensed as the slim panther suit vibrated against him. The Vibranium laced into the fabrics like a second skin heated and pulsed. Brontë tensed as the blast ripped through his skin and clanged against his bio-metal skeleton, ripping the skin off his chest and face in a flash.

X-Men: Feral Progeny (Marvel AU/What If?)

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Darrell_Jordan

11mth

Commented

if I remember correctly, didn't his adamantium get ripped out

His hulking muscles tensed as the slim panther suit vibrated against him. The Vibranium laced into the fabrics like a second skin heated and pulsed. Brontë tensed as the blast ripped through his skin and clanged against his bio-metal skeleton, ripping the skin off his chest and face in a flash.

X-Men: Feral Progeny (Marvel AU/What If?)

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Darrell_Jordan

11mth

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just my opinion, but most stories I read on here are really good and hold my interest enough to keep me coming back to it, but when other things get added that are different from the main scope of the story , it throws off the flow of the story and steers it off of what made it good and makes it less interesting to me. just my opinion .

ch 97 Legend of Balrog

X-Men: Onslaught

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Darrell_Jordan

1yr

Commented

so what happens when Malia turns back human

I am really trying to keep Mc away from the main plot while trying to move his plot along, if you guys read this chapter and believe that it is not good and that I should change it in any way, you can comment it. I will delete this one and make a new one.