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Hey! So I was wondering if a new chapter was going to come through? or are you done with this book???? I really like it!!!!

3rd

That is totally awesome! I can't wait for them to confront Gary about being the leader. and his response being a smirk or something of that matter. haha

awesome chapter . can we please get more frequent chapters? please????

Yyyyooooo!!!! that was awesome!!!!!

I second this!!! Please another chapter today would be wonderful!

Hahahahaha. yes. 'Interrogate' them!!! hahaha

Good chapter. keep going!

Lets go!!! I am so stoked for these chapters! you are making my week so far. keep it up!!!

Heck yeah!! I'm happy your are starting to most more regularly!!!

great chapter. can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

great chapter!!! I have been dying to read the next chapter. please keep updating!!!!

awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to see how this plays out.

like wise!!

cool chapter. can't wait to see what happens to duncan

also I don't mind if you change things slightly or however you want. I just wanted to give any sort of suggestion and hope to inspire even if just a little bit

of course. I love reading on this app for quite a long time. started reading your book a while back ago like quite a will ago hahaha. but I don't my being patient. I just recently commented on when the next update would be because I was nervous you might have dropped the book all together. the book and chapters so far are awesome. not gonna lie, the character development makes me want to start writing but don't know how to start and afraid I ain't that creative to go any where. so I love supporting others. and your book is one of my top favorites in this category

Great chapter. As for suggestions, I'm not a writer. but what if you go along the lines of Nathaniel going outside the reach of the witch's power and trying to communicate, however because his power and strength aren't the greatest he comes into a sentry that also has top notch tracking and scavenging vibe. get into a skirmish. go back and forth. slowly Nathaniel slowly loses control and loses overall, but then all of a sudden his wolf spirit wakens up a bit more than usual like he has more control over it. and takes down the sentry. cuts to niklaus. if I'm not mistaken, the person just looking at niklaus is blink. but whoever it is continues to stare and niklaus goes to side of the cage and looks the man in his eyes to creep or scare him and says some sort of snarky reply. the man looks down, laughs, and says something back. they talk.... I don't know something like that, up to you. you got this. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. your characters are awesome.

when is the next chapter coming out?