Amadeo_Trevino

1yr

Posted

this is a really good book I like the pace and it keeps getting better please keep updating This Is A Good Book And Not Many Have written A story and the Dovah

Amadeo_Trevino

1yr

Posted

I like the story but the author can't keep the amount of health consistent it went from 150k+ to 15k or from 300k to 30k I can't tell which is which anymore its almost like he is not immersed enough to pay attention to his own details but overall a good story

Online Game: My Health Point Has No Limits

Games · Foreign Region King

Amadeo_Trevino

1yr

Replied to Amadeo_Trevino

your writing is awesome just take my words with a grain of salt it's your story and I love the way its coming along I love the way your building up the romance

I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Fantasy · Diyen_Pi

Amadeo_Trevino

1yr

Posted

the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author

I Received System to Become Dragonborn

Fantasy · Diyen_Pi

Amadeo_Trevino

2yr

Posted

I'd give more stars but the updating on this is too long 😩 😫 😪 I hope the author can post more of this story it is really good. keep up the good work author

My Passive Skills are Invincible!

Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi

Amadeo_Trevino

2yr

Commented

you can't end it like that wth 😤 right at a love confession tsk tsk tsk bad Author

ch 55 Future Developments(Cause, why not?)

Amadeo_Trevino

2yr

Commented

where is the link for what they did to Issei

ch 0 1 Prologue

Amadeo_Trevino

2yr

Posted

Authur I love this book but I think that you should add clementina to the relationship..... by her proving her love by almost dying by protecting Noah or something just a thought Author

Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Amadeo_Trevino

2yr

Commented

I just love the bond William has with mama ella keep it going this is fantastic this is an amazing story where mama ella is a good judge of character like a real mother

ch 74 Someone Who Was Favored By The Gods

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

for all the haters that can't participate gold when you see it screw you i think the character development was amazing it made your chest wanna drop through some of it. remember haters if all your going to do Is give hateful opinions keep it to yourself.